Fireside Winter

Fireside Winter

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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first posted on MySpace 10/01/2008 reworked a little today :)

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Fireside Winter


She held me
in warm hands
the same way

French toast
holds butter

Leaves outside
trembled and

Maple ran
to ground
in October

in South Dakota

E.


© 2015 Einstein Noodle



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"She held me
in warm hands
the same way
french toast
holds butter..."

What a way to get to me! The impact of those words are impeccable...what a lovely memory you have construed with poetic fashion.

Such a beautiful, beautiful read!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

Hi Kelly! so nice to meet you! i will stop by shortly to read :) thank you for your visit and encour.. read more
This is outstanding! I love that line, she held me the same way...........

I'll tell you E some of the best works I've read involve minimalism. Great job!

regards,

al

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

thank you so much Alfred .. i lean towards minimalism myself and unless doing a particular form i sp.. read more
I loved this so romantic very nice.


I loved these stanza's lines.


She held me
in warm hands
the same way

French toast
holds butter




Makes me think of Autumn at least
it isn't as cold during Autumn but when
winter comes it get brutal and you freeze
Brrrrrrrrrrrrrrr....




Thank you for stopping by my page



God bless. Benita


Posted 2 Years Ago


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Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

i hear you Benita! perhaps a title change would make it better .. maybe Winter Coming .. or Autumn ?.. read more
Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

2 Years Ago

No the Title fits very well you're welcome was a pleasure to read. thank you. god bless. Benita
I like the insidness and the outsideness of this sweetness. Butterness and underworldly mapleness, like fire and frost, fellows in a comfortable conspiracy.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

i absolutely love the way you put it .. in true Delmar style! thank you! the cycle of conspiracies! .. read more
Ah! I love this. So sexy, and sensual, the image of syrup and butter. Yum. In the faves.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

thanks KL! so glad you enjoyed the breakfast! ;) i am humbled and flattered it made its way into you.. read more
you painted a picture of South Dakota, but for me the colors showed Vermont in October, wow did i relate to this muchly...and i loved the image of "French toast holding butter"---nice personification there, E.
love short, tight, impactful writes like this.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

you are right ... there are so few maple trees in SD everyone knows where to go when they turn red ;.. read more
A beautiful image here, E.! I LOVE the french toast analogy! Brilliant!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

thansk Riss .. so nice to be getting to know you better! glad you enjoyed the analogy .. it has spec.. read more

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