Einstein's Ring

Einstein's Ring

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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i hope you enjoy this go at an English sonnet and a bit of romancing the Science ... i added a haiku for the same title for fun .. let me know what you think :)

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Einstein's Ring

My darkness falls over your haloed brow;
beguiling my heart, seducing my dream.
These eyes in search, the sourcing of the Tao,
a beauty eclipsed beyond what it seems.

Fair light is bending 'round curves, thus renew
dark matter enraptured heart in the skies
my gravity closing  a rainbow hue
to gather wrapped fingers of stars and sighs

Your presence was hiding behind cold shield;
while lightning explodes in brilliant arrays
Light sounding 'round heavenly faces yield
sun rings while Helios tightly at bay.

Gaze not in wonder God's gifts that abound;
songs of the Universe sing and resound. 

Haiku (of the same title)

galaxies hiding
eclipsing eyes perceiving
light bends delighting





© 2016 Einstein Noodle



Author's Note

Einstein Noodle
from Wikipedia
"n observational astronomy an Einstein ring, also known as an Einstein-Chwolson ring or Chwolson ring, is the deformation of the light from a source (such as a galaxy or star) into a ring through gravitational lensing of the source's light by an object with an extremely large mass (such as another galaxy or a black hole)."[1][2]

dark matter: (same sourse)"Dark matter is a type of matter comprising approximately 27% of the mass and energy in the observable universe that is not accounted for by dark energy,"

dark energy: "a theoretical repulsive force that counteracts gravity and causes the universe to expand at an accelerating rate.
"Einstein's theories allow for the possible existence of dark energy" "

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I believe there is a relationship between science and art (or love and science) that enhances both... there is much still "hidden" by dark matter/dark energy and also much that romance hides in the dark spaces (not meant as dark and evil, etc, but things we hide from each other) in our minds... in your "romancing the science" you wonderfully navigate the eddies and distortions of gravitational pulls... just as in romance we are influenced by the gravitational pulls of each other..

I enjoyed this concept of Einstein's Ring mingled with the Einstein Noodle and out comes a haiku as well.... ah such romance E and thank you for the galactic fling..

redzone

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

11 Months Ago

and thank you redzone ..for your thorough and sensitive read .. i enjoy your insights very much! its.. read more



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OH YES! A real love poem! Einstein, you are a genius. You have elevated human love to great heights!!!!.........oer, perhaps it was not meant to be a love poem. But I will keep looking for one. I thought this one was a brilliant poem, anyway!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Months Ago

well... it is .. sort of .. and meant to be a love poem for sure .. thanks for the re-visiting .. lo.. read more
Both poems are very cleverly done. I am no expert but I think you have mostly got the metre right. A beautifully vivid poem. I too wrote about the Universe singing!

Posted 9 Months Ago


Great Aunt Astri

9 Months Ago

juST tHE uNIVERSAL UNIVERSE (excuse, MY funny WRITINGCOMPUTER IS SUFFERING FROM
Great Aunt Astri

9 Months Ago

A VIRUS WHICH IS UPSETTING IT
Einstein Noodle

9 Months Ago

Gesundheit!
I think that we are created in pairs...one light(+)...one dark(-) bumping around this universe until we are electrically reconnected. This piece makes me think maybe I am not alone in my thoughts

Posted 11 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

11 Months Ago

i don't think we are ever really alone dear Queenie .. i like your impressions of + and - ... the ev.. read more
As a word-y type I often wondered if I wouldn't have retained more science-y info if the two hadn't been combined as you have done so well here E.
I'll surely not forget this peek into Einsteins ring (ooh matron!) in a hurry.

Im just looking at the rhyming here - its tight and whats more it still makes sense. One of my pet hates is when some poets shoe-horn any old rhyming word in instead of taking time to find the 'right' one.
You are not a shoe-horner.
;p



Posted 11 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

11 Months Ago

;) ...........
Tony Jordan

11 Months Ago

a shoe-horned limerick

There was a young man from Natucket
Whose pet Mallard w.. read more
Einstein Noodle

11 Months Ago

your on a roll!
I believe there is a relationship between science and art (or love and science) that enhances both... there is much still "hidden" by dark matter/dark energy and also much that romance hides in the dark spaces (not meant as dark and evil, etc, but things we hide from each other) in our minds... in your "romancing the science" you wonderfully navigate the eddies and distortions of gravitational pulls... just as in romance we are influenced by the gravitational pulls of each other..

I enjoyed this concept of Einstein's Ring mingled with the Einstein Noodle and out comes a haiku as well.... ah such romance E and thank you for the galactic fling..

redzone

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

11 Months Ago

and thank you redzone ..for your thorough and sensitive read .. i enjoy your insights very much! its.. read more
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I love it, E! Love and the wonder of, is the greatest "galaxy" of all :) Your words bend their light around my heart. Thanks for sharing this cosmic hug my friend :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

11 Months Ago

lynn! you have made my day for sure..thanks so much .. thank you for receiving this hug (((((((ej))).. read more
I love work that has more than one way in. More than one pathway. Here I find a multitude. I also love the complexity of something more than metaphor in this (or these) work (or works). Interesting dichotomies here beteen love poem and astronomical art.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thank you Ken, for reading and reviewing...science holds a lot of wonderment right at the threshold .. read more
This is beautiful whether about the stars and planets or something or someone else you find that captivates your thoughts and feelings. Beautifully captured..
Totally incidental, yet worth mentioning just for the coincidence. I see that you wrote this in July, but the first I heard of the Einstein ring was last night, when Rajesh gave pretty much word for word your description. As it was the latest episode, I found this rather eerie :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

Einstein's Ring is a well known phenomenon in science .. i learned of it reading a book called Einst.. read more
Lorry.

12 Months Ago

Oh, sorry...It wasn't a poem, it was on the big bang theory show's latest episode. I must have been .. read more
Einstein Noodle

12 Months Ago

ah :) ..........
I love this piece.
Reading it is like taking a magical ride of the mind...beautiful in it's grace and flow and rhyme.
Loved this opening: My darkness falls over your haloed brow;/beguiling my heart, seducing my dream.
This could have almost been a lover's poem to his sweetheart, and yet, I don't think it is...it's deeper...and yet not. It's lyrical, in its own unique way, touching the conscience like a butterfly pausing on a petal, before taking flight again. Nicely done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

you made my day Reed ... i am on the edge of blushing ;) thank you for your beautiful words in revie.. read more
Einstien Noodle,
This was really intersting and informative with of course a lot of poetic beauty all tied together. I was inspired to say the least. It is so neat to see how you brought elements of space and science together within design. Blessings to you as your craft is perfected kathy

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

your comments are very encouraging ..thank you so much Kathy!! glad you found this one and like it ... read more
Kathy Van Kurin

1 Year Ago

Your are so very welcome!! Have a wonderful day sir. Kathy

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