Einstein's Ring

Einstein's Ring

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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i hope you enjoy this go at an English sonnet and a bit of romancing the Science ... i added a haiku for the same title for fun .. let me know what you think :)

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Einstein's Ring

My darkness falls over your haloed brow;
beguiling my heart, seducing my dream.
These eyes in search, the sourcing of the Tao,
a beauty eclipsed beyond what it seems.

Fair light is bending 'round curves, thus renew
dark matter enraptured heart in the skies
my gravity closing  a rainbow hue
to gather wrapped fingers of stars and sighs

Your presence was hiding behind cold shield;
while lightning explodes in brilliant arrays
Light sounding 'round heavenly faces yield
sun rings while Helios tightly at bay.

Gaze not in wonder God's gifts that abound;
songs of the Universe sing and resound. 

Haiku (of the same title)

galaxies hiding
eclipsing eyes perceiving
light bends delighting





© 2016 Einstein Noodle



Author's Note

Einstein Noodle
from Wikipedia
"n observational astronomy an Einstein ring, also known as an Einstein-Chwolson ring or Chwolson ring, is the deformation of the light from a source (such as a galaxy or star) into a ring through gravitational lensing of the source's light by an object with an extremely large mass (such as another galaxy or a black hole)."[1][2]

dark matter: (same sourse)"Dark matter is a type of matter comprising approximately 27% of the mass and energy in the observable universe that is not accounted for by dark energy,"

dark energy: "a theoretical repulsive force that counteracts gravity and causes the universe to expand at an accelerating rate.
"Einstein's theories allow for the possible existence of dark energy" "

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For me, and aside of the Author's note, this was a meditation's experience, the connection with the higher divine power, the images You saw through it, the presence of Your lover whom was firmly there almost in each image, it was like floating through the universe, an experience not many can fully go through. an amazing sonnet Mr.E something new from You for me to read, and it was a pleasure and real joy, the Haiku is quite amazing and strong too, it's like a "waking up" message to open the mind, to see beyond what eyes can see, and in both poems I felt a sentimental yearning waving gently like the calm sea behind Your lines.

Thank You for sharing Your superb experience with all of us.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

what can i say Light ... such a sensitive reflective read and review on your part ... i could not fe.. read more
Light

3 Months Ago

You are always so very welcome, and I say that You surely have big and wide wings to adventure in th.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

:))))))))))))))))))))))) thanks Light!



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Light and dark cannot exist without eachother- as if a balancing needed - nature knows best- in the silence of beauty much mystery wonder and delight is found- to be part of such wonders is an honour of life to experience the silence wisdom of the unknown- some of the so called- ‘crazies/ mad/ non- intelligent are the wise ones- Silence has much power- wonderful write🌹

Posted 3 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

yes! Thoughts ...i totally agree about the "crazies" ... thank you for reviewing .. your words lead .. read more
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

3 Months Ago

Please don’t try- do- all is possible when you believe- many blessings sent your way-happy smiles .. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

thanks Thoughts ... same to you :)
I don't think anyone can make science sound so intresting.... ...
:p
You do a wonderful job of mixing both art and science...and ooh I first thought E. Ring hahaha... :)
Like the Saturn's ring... :) always found of that planet must be Bec of the ring I thought...
We girls have a thing for ring heheh

I loved all of it...

You are wonderful human...poet and friend ...
((Hugs))

Posted 3 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

ahahahaha ... there is a ring around me heart for my Norma dear one ... but yes ... this is not quit.. read more
For me, and aside of the Author's note, this was a meditation's experience, the connection with the higher divine power, the images You saw through it, the presence of Your lover whom was firmly there almost in each image, it was like floating through the universe, an experience not many can fully go through. an amazing sonnet Mr.E something new from You for me to read, and it was a pleasure and real joy, the Haiku is quite amazing and strong too, it's like a "waking up" message to open the mind, to see beyond what eyes can see, and in both poems I felt a sentimental yearning waving gently like the calm sea behind Your lines.

Thank You for sharing Your superb experience with all of us.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

what can i say Light ... such a sensitive reflective read and review on your part ... i could not fe.. read more
Light

3 Months Ago

You are always so very welcome, and I say that You surely have big and wide wings to adventure in th.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

:))))))))))))))))))))))) thanks Light!
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My word.. you are both a brave, and a clever so and so... I could never attempt such a feat... it seems you have succeeded on both counts... top marks and true............ Write on and stay well my good friend..... Neville

Posted 3 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

thanks Neville..you are too kind .. i love Albert, his work, his faulted life and math .. yet genius.. read more
Neville Pettitt

3 Months Ago

peace, love & a whole lotta respect, back at ya.... :) N.
OH YES! A real love poem! Einstein, you are a genius. You have elevated human love to great heights!!!!.........oer, perhaps it was not meant to be a love poem. But I will keep looking for one. I thought this one was a brilliant poem, anyway!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

well... it is .. sort of .. and meant to be a love poem for sure .. thanks for the re-visiting .. lo.. read more
Both poems are very cleverly done. I am no expert but I think you have mostly got the metre right. A beautifully vivid poem. I too wrote about the Universe singing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Great Aunt Astri

1 Year Ago

juST tHE uNIVERSAL UNIVERSE (excuse, MY funny WRITINGCOMPUTER IS SUFFERING FROM
Great Aunt Astri

1 Year Ago

A VIRUS WHICH IS UPSETTING IT
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

Gesundheit!
I think that we are created in pairs...one light(+)...one dark(-) bumping around this universe until we are electrically reconnected. This piece makes me think maybe I am not alone in my thoughts

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

i don't think we are ever really alone dear Queenie .. i like your impressions of + and - ... the ev.. read more
As a word-y type I often wondered if I wouldn't have retained more science-y info if the two hadn't been combined as you have done so well here E.
I'll surely not forget this peek into Einsteins ring (ooh matron!) in a hurry.

Im just looking at the rhyming here - its tight and whats more it still makes sense. One of my pet hates is when some poets shoe-horn any old rhyming word in instead of taking time to find the 'right' one.
You are not a shoe-horner.
;p



Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

;) ...........
Tony Jordan

2 Years Ago

a shoe-horned limerick

There was a young man from Natucket
Whose pet Mallard w.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

your on a roll!
I believe there is a relationship between science and art (or love and science) that enhances both... there is much still "hidden" by dark matter/dark energy and also much that romance hides in the dark spaces (not meant as dark and evil, etc, but things we hide from each other) in our minds... in your "romancing the science" you wonderfully navigate the eddies and distortions of gravitational pulls... just as in romance we are influenced by the gravitational pulls of each other..

I enjoyed this concept of Einstein's Ring mingled with the Einstein Noodle and out comes a haiku as well.... ah such romance E and thank you for the galactic fling..

redzone

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

and thank you redzone ..for your thorough and sensitive read .. i enjoy your insights very much! its.. read more
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I love it, E! Love and the wonder of, is the greatest "galaxy" of all :) Your words bend their light around my heart. Thanks for sharing this cosmic hug my friend :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

lynn! you have made my day for sure..thanks so much .. thank you for receiving this hug (((((((ej))).. read more

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