One Small Voice

One Small Voice

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
"

not one group owns it ... all groups owe it ..

"
Image result for paper tiger
one small voice
few trite noises
                      with 
rights 
cast out to sea
                       hard the
lizard licking 
            slick slip lips
on the tongues of
un - 
      ruling gavels
                       pounding
pound
              pound     
                                down and 
grounding. 
          
Baluga smiles.
one small voice
lost lions roar
paper thin
inferno soars
10/18/2016
E.  

© 2016 Einstein Noodle


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Einstein Noodle

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There are number of lines here that I don't like. Because I did not think of them first. This whole write takes the reader on an almost staccato development. Bouncing (as the format emphasises) from one thought pole, one concept to another and yet the whole is satisfying as far as structure is concened. Subject however is another matter entirely. I find the formost feeling I get it one of unease. I maybe way out there but I feel you do not intend the reader to walk away with a feeling of contentment. You wish to continue the thinking as perhaps the inner child, as some one else mentioned, does. In any event it is striking workmanship.
Beluga smile indeed.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

yes .. definitely unease and a thinking thing:) i so appreciate your candid remarks .. and your visi.. read more
Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

ps so glad you listened to and watched the video ;)))))))



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i love the way its simple, straight and at the same time interesting

Posted 7 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

nice to meet you! i very much appreciate the time you took to read and review ..it means a lot to me.. read more
3X3MPLER

7 Years Ago

you are welcomed
It is those small voices that will sing truth the loudest if we only take the time to listen. Sadly, most are far too busy with their lives to pay attention when they need to most. Excellent writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

thank you for stopping by ..its nice to meet you hare :) glad you enjoyed this one .. lots of voices.. read more
Does not the innocence have just honest good intentions. Lovely write Einstein

Posted 7 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

hey andrew!! always nice to see you ;) thank you for taking time .. i can't help but wonder that our.. read more
Innocent voices, happy smiles, good intentions. They color the world with beauty and openness. Very soft and hopeful for the future. You write wonderfully, sir....:::)))

Posted 7 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

thank you Sami ... i appreciate your words .. its a blessing :) yes .. innocent voices .. and childr.. read more
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

So true. You are welcome. ...::::)))
We live in a world of throwaway kids and one or no parent households. Who is there to hear their cries? Valentine

Posted 7 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

so true Valentine ... i think you hear them :) thank you for your visits and reviews always ...
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My sons small voice can silence a sea of chattering, this is applicable to all children, theirs is the wisdom we lose too soon. They deserve to have our undivided attention. Love this song, love Kenny Loggins, I sing and play return to pooh corner to my son all the time. Super piece E. R xo

Posted 7 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

God bless you ...and your son .. special song, people and time :))) your sharing puts a fine warmth .. read more
hello ... oh one small voice ... yes ... perhaps we should turn control over to what the children want ... then we have to listen to their demands

'I want endless play, who made rules anyway?'
'I want to feel loved'
'I want people to stop fighting and arguing, because when people fight and argue I get scared'
'I want to share my things with my friends, their friends too, in fact I'd like to share my things with the whole wide world, for if we all shared, nobody would miss out, we'd always be trying new things from differnet people and even different countries'
'I want to make sure the animals are safe, it's not fair to treat them so badly'
'and ... I want ice-cream every day'

we need to not only listen to the children, but show them that love can win, and it can start with them, if they choose only LOVE

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

what a world it would be dear KW! what a world it can be ... love your fiery review .. my plan for t.. read more
Einstein Noodle,
Your paper tiger is a wonderful image lead-in. Big voices' arogancy, pride, greed, etc may cloud the public mind but............one small voice led by innocence for the sake of children, the future and those just trying to do what they think best, well this whisper is real nontheless. Loved the video very much also. Keep speaking. Kathy

Posted 7 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

thanks Kathy ... we need that one small voice these days .. so many lies lies and more lies :(
dear Gene... children are my favorite people...
One small voice will alter my course... truly, Pat

Posted 7 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

thank you Pat .. i am a retired RN who worked in the Pediatric Intensive Care most of my 24 yrs. .. .. read more
Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

Yes, children are precious and need to be listened to...
We can all share our wisdom... even.. read more
Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

dear Gene, I adore the video with Kenny Loggins and Big Bird.
The ending is so endearing..... read more
A child's voice can halt a thousand tall ones. We owe it to them to stop and listen.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

i agree ...when an adult takes a little time to give to a child by listening to them the spirit grow.. read more
Papaya

7 Years Ago

My pleasure Mr. E. :)

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