Remains

Remains

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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captcha: "illguide"

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Remains

decay fermenting
white light halos the darkness
in birth, our remains

6/16/2017
E.

© 2017 Einstein Noodle



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Ha-hah!
An appropriate "captcha", Gene.
Well,there won't be any fermenting of my olde carcass … it will end as ash. I like the word "fermenting", though, as it brings to mind the fizz, foam, and froth of beer, as bizarre as the thought of "body beer" is … oh-MY!
Now, talk about mind bending, this is the epitome of abstract poetry to wrap our grey cells around. But, considering the "premise" ; ) of reincarnation, it makes perfect sense … LOL!
Almost, a Senryu, with the exception of L2, but that can be easily remedied with an "of".

I like the way your mind works, Gene … you're every bit as weird as me, if not weirder! ⁓ Richard : )


(a 90 for this one, due to the missing "of", or whatever you come up with … love the title, too)

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cryingkate

2 Months Ago

Pass that Jug Gene...
Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

hic! :-}
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Tony Jordan

1 Month Ago

brilliant craic guys !!!!!!!
xDD



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The voice seems to call to us, to those places that once held life, now in decay. There is a blending of the past and the now, the birthing world and the world of the last fragments of us that remain. Profoundly moving.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

thank you for your insightful review and kind words owl ... its very gratifying that this one moved .. read more
What an excellent layered series of thoughts came from this. Hermetic is what it is.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Months Ago

always honored by your visits my friend .. thank you for your sensitive reading of this senryu .. it.. read more
every thing ends,and every thing begins,a cycle of re birth

Posted 4 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Months Ago

wordman..what a treat to see you ..thank you for taking time to review .. its the plain truth aint i.. read more
 wordman

4 Months Ago

my pleasure e
Short and sweet.
But is it the end.
The new beginning.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Months Ago

a matter of Faith alone isn't it?! thanks for stopping Paul ... you seem to be surviving the pummeli.. read more
Paul Bell

4 Months Ago

Keeping my head down.
Einstein Noodle

4 Months Ago

:) ....................
a very spiritual write
we wonder how does this soul live on
is it reborn every once in a while
through light

i love this one

Posted 4 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Months Ago

thank you for taking time Nisreen ... we see it reflected all around us eh!? big hug to you my frien.. read more
Alpha and omega. Seeds of death in birth. " in birth, our remains. Truth. Kudos!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Months Ago

:) ......... thanks for reviewing Annette! much appreciated
E.

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