Remains

Remains

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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Remains

decay fermenting
white light halos the darkness
in birth, our remains

6/16/2017
E.

© 2017 Einstein Noodle


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Ha-hah!
An appropriate "captcha", Gene.
Well,there won't be any fermenting of my olde carcass … it will end as ash. I like the word "fermenting", though, as it brings to mind the fizz, foam, and froth of beer, as bizarre as the thought of "body beer" is … oh-MY!
Now, talk about mind bending, this is the epitome of abstract poetry to wrap our grey cells around. But, considering the "premise" ; ) of reincarnation, it makes perfect sense … LOL!
Almost, a Senryu, with the exception of L2, but that can be easily remedied with an "of".

I like the way your mind works, Gene … you're every bit as weird as me, if not weirder! ⁓ Richard : )


(a 90 for this one, due to the missing "of", or whatever you come up with … love the title, too)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cryingkate

6 Years Ago

Pass that Jug Gene...
Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

hic! :-}
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Tony Jordan

6 Years Ago

brilliant craic guys !!!!!!!
xDD



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I'm wondering why the decay is fermenting? Too much yeast perhaps? Do you think we can get some of that fermenting decay, well how bout this, I will have my fermenting decaying remains sent over your way. You can make some moonshine out of me, only to be drunken when the moon is at it's fullest and only to be had all at once by you alone ... :D hahaha yeah ... I a little bit of me and you ... then you must write a poem and dedicate it to all the remains of another day :D

Love ME X

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

oh what fun and fine belly laugh you give me this morning Sparkle .. can i call you "Sparkle" ? yes... read more
KWP

6 Years Ago

Now listen E ... I am thinking 'Elizabethan Broth' makes me sound like a plump lady of the house who.. read more
Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

ahahahaha ..OK ... how about Liz's Bordeau of Beers ... she can be dressed in bordello finery ... al.. read more
The voice seems to call to us, to those places that once held life, now in decay. There is a blending of the past and the now, the birthing world and the world of the last fragments of us that remain. Profoundly moving.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

thank you for your insightful review and kind words owl ... its very gratifying that this one moved .. read more
What an excellent layered series of thoughts came from this. Hermetic is what it is.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

always honored by your visits my friend .. thank you for your sensitive reading of this senryu .. it.. read more
every thing ends,and every thing begins,a cycle of re birth

Posted 6 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

wordman..what a treat to see you ..thank you for taking time to review .. its the plain truth aint i.. read more
 wordman

6 Years Ago

my pleasure e
Short and sweet.
But is it the end.
The new beginning.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

a matter of Faith alone isn't it?! thanks for stopping Paul ... you seem to be surviving the pummeli.. read more
Paul Bell

6 Years Ago

Keeping my head down.
Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

:) ....................
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a very spiritual write
we wonder how does this soul live on
is it reborn every once in a while
through light

i love this one

Posted 6 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

thank you for taking time Nisreen ... we see it reflected all around us eh!? big hug to you my frien.. read more
Alpha and omega. Seeds of death in birth. " in birth, our remains. Truth. Kudos!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

:) ......... thanks for reviewing Annette! much appreciated
E.

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