Sticks

Sticks

A Poem by Einstein Noodle


My dog showed me


sticks

Her name is Bella and
she showed three sticks to me

on our walk

sticking 
out of the creek water where
she stood slurpingupdrink


Bella is faun colored and 
Bull Mastiff'd

wide mouthed frog

one hundred twenty five pounds full
 ..

she showed me
one long, finger thick stick with tails ...and another
eighteen inches ...ends shredded and

one for my mind

One

For

My

Mind

its the process you see
we took them home one day and
i made a bird

she showed me sticks
i made a bird

it's flying now behind my eye
every time we walk along the creek. 

The process .....

Do you see?

her sticks?



:)
08/28/2017
E.


© 2017 Einstein Noodle



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Dogs have a way of showing how... especially your precious Bella who has the imagination so many human beings' lack, their eyes and minds too busy looking at the ground.

All my two not long ago did this morning was rush about in the sunshine, wondering where on earth it came from.. didn't like to tell them that rain's due!

Your lively imagination is magic both in creating stick figures that fly across water as if born to it.. and words that fly into your readers' hearts!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

10 Months Ago

oh thank you emma...your review is just precious to me ..so kind and encouraging ... and as dog love.. read more
emmajoy

10 Months Ago

Was my pleasure (always is!) but my punctuation is abyssmal! Keep save and smiling, dear friend, pl.. read more



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I was impressed with the sculptural creativity behind this poem. I assume that Bella will receive some share of any forthcoming royalties:-))
N.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

ahahaha yes...she always gets her cookie ;) thanks Norman .. i appreciate your reading and commentin.. read more
very thought provoking poem

Posted 6 Months Ago


simba

6 Months Ago

I didn’t read the first line completely missed it so read it differently lol
simba

6 Months Ago

I’ve just read it again and actually missed all the parts that were about the dog, sorry my mind h.. read more
Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

:)...... it happens doesn't it?! sometimes i read things so amiss the mark of the writer ...come bac.. read more
Ohhhh! really very creative! very sweet and precious!!! a piece made with Bella and You! she needed You, needed Your talent, and she just knew how to do it until she reached her goal! Thank You for sharing another personal poem that adds more warmth into the pages.

Happy New Year Bella, be sweet and smart as You just did above :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

Light..your review tickles the hell out of me ..Bella is all that...the epitome of sweetest thing ev.. read more
How delightful that you find creativity spawned in the company of a friend, or man's best friend.The house of our inspiration has many windows for the light to enter through. Beautiful.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

yes it does Fabian ..well said! thank you so much for reviewing..glad you enjoyed ... ain't nuttin' .. read more
A wonderful poem my friend. I had to read again. Nature is a fine teacher to show us. Life can be a thousand things in a second. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

thanks again my friend! i can see how this one would appeal to you ... you put it so well sir...natu.. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

I did like this one and you are welcome my friend.
She shares what seems a simple stick but means much more to her. You acknowledged it's importance and created something so beautiful, like a symbol of the special bond you both share. Please keep writing and creating!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

thank you Taino for bringing me back to this poem...it was a special walk and yes with doggies we ha.. read more
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Zoe
You both have a great understanding I must say. What a pair you two make!
A light, fun to read poem. Enjoyed it!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Months Ago

you are very kind ...Bella is much more full of it than i ;)) we do have fun tho ... and now we have.. read more
Zoe

7 Months Ago

Haha, all of you make a happy family im sure! Most welcome.
wow.... I love this sticks!!! the poem is fun and makes a good pleasure reading. it is also creative.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

9 Months Ago

thanks so much Mirror! so gratified you found this one a fun read ... the whole experience was over.. read more
Mirror

9 Months Ago

you are most welcome, dearie.
You and your dog in harmony! She knew what you needed, and you created a beautiful sculpture.
Nicely done.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

9 Months Ago

thanks Auntie ..such a pleasure to have you review ... glad you found this one and enjoyed .. Bella .. read more
I suppose that's why dogs lead, and humans follow.
Dogs have remarkable abilities. From sensing cancer, to everyday tasks humans could never contemplate.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

9 Months Ago

yes they do ... incredible sensing abilities ... just by allowing our love to them heals US doesn't .. read more

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