Alone

Alone

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
"

do take the time to watch the dance video ..it is so cool...says i! ;)

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 Peering

The pair pirouettes on
                                  the pier.

The lightning wasn't quite right
             
they

couldn't quite focus on point.

I am not sure what happened to them.

They just kept spinning 

on their own

in the mist.

                      Alone


10/15/2017
E

© 2017 Einstein Noodle



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Zoe
Ahh...your words as magical and tender as the dance in the video itself. Lovely poetry!

Posted 1 Week Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Week Ago

thank you Zoe; so glad you decided to read this one .. it brings me back to it and i watch the danci.. read more
Zoe

1 Week Ago

No problem!
I've always loved the ballet, and have secretly wished I could dance like that. It is relaxing and intoxicating to watch, all at the same time. It leaves me breathless...like the words flowing here, from your pen.

I've missed you, and hope you are enjoying a wonderful autumn!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Week Ago

so glad you are back dear friend! and i so appreciate your reading and reviewing always .. makes me .. read more
Alone spinning in mist... Will be honest, am never really a fan of cut-up style presentation with poems... Yet this somehow conveyed the mist feeling in my mind... The timing it creates when read... Also exemplary... Usually it detracts, this adds... Will admit, I skimmed video, then got stuck watching because i like dancing, hah...

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Weeks Ago

well...how pleased i am then ...to draw you to conversion ..cut ups are my meat and potatoes ..;) an.. read more
Silente

2 Weeks Ago

Of course, my pleasure...
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BBP
Romantic flow of drunken love!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Weeks Ago

ahahaha yes..lets not forget the booze ;) thanks darlin' ..sure do appreciate you stopping by to rea.. read more
Wow... Always a treat to read your poetry. The moment in time is timeless.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Weeks Ago

your words are so kind..and timely .. feeling a bit blue tonight :( so happy you stopped by
E.. read more
I like the play on the words, peer, pair and pier. Essentially we are all alone, even with our shadow. I enjoyed your poem and the video, and your interpretation.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Great Aunt Astri

2 Weeks Ago

PS Is Jamie a girl's name as well as a male name? Who are these dancers?
Einstein Noodle

2 Weeks Ago

i don't know much about the dancers ..went searching for something to fit my poem and found them tha.. read more
Great Aunt Astri

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks ........:}
There is something so privately romantic about your words in this one, E. A couple in the mist in love and not caring about the world....heavy sigh. The video is mesmerizing.....truly. So very lovely to read and watch. Lydi**

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Weeks Ago

thank you for reviewing Lydia ..really appreciate your take :) and so glad you enjoyed the video...i.. read more
Read, lost in the unravelling of your words.. and they drift like seeds and seeds on a breezy beautiful day.. truly, really, love this poem.. think i'll just lie back and dream every second of it.

What a video to go along with it.. but, in all honesty.. love the sound of your words alone, even more.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Weeks Ago

how happy your review makes me ..and so glad that you enjoyed the video too ... i think it is partic.. read more
emmajoy

3 Weeks Ago

You know i only say what i think... and, dear friend, I have.
Einstein Noodle

3 Weeks Ago

i think you are a beautiful soul ..and admirable writer/poetess ... and of course honest .. thank yo.. read more
It left like the words are stumbling and falling :D

Lovely notion!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Weeks Ago

thank you for taking time my new friend! i appreciate it!
E.
I wandered the words slowly, with the music playing. How beautifully painful it seemed, with the shadows of the dance all around them, the spinning, the movement, yet somehow disconnected. Together and yet alone. Breathtaking.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


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Einstein Noodle

3 Weeks Ago

God bless you my friend...so gratified you played the music and watched the dance as well ... really.. read more
An owl on the moon

3 Weeks Ago

It's always a joy to visit your world, my friend. Always! :)

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