In Loving God

In Loving God

A Poem by Einstein Noodle

In Loving God


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I let the dogs out this morning  
the sky still dark
the windbreeze pressing the moist fog to my face and mind
it smells like fresh hung linens
the dogs offer lakes and rivers
leave fertile architectures ..... shapes like
The Tower of Pisa, 
                                   the Pantheon,
Pyramids and sprawling ranches ...
they are big dogs with plenty of supplies

thank you oh Lord ... thank you oh Lord
taking once more a deep precious breath 
of my life.

Towers hoisted against forbearing sky - 
mountain's root and nerve the
 oceans' poise ....................
I see .................
an undying accord 
a persistent rapport
The dog chases the trails of nightfall and
I inhale the scents: perpetuity on mortality
So, thank you, oh Lord, for every deep breath of my life

How can one express such splendor 
such vast an expanse in the smallest of life
green shoots and sprouts
clear, clean ice drops .................
one drop of God
on seeking tongues
on bending oak and iron

when our heavy rain enfolds comfort arms
on weathered, rusted roofs ................
God's own assurance melds,
welds the bonds ............

How big you are 
Oh God.

E.
02/23/2018


© 2018 Einstein Noodle



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Einstein Noodle

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Your poetry a celebration of dawn rising. Your lines elevating my mood. As I respond to you the early sun floods through the upper bay window where we are staying for the week. All is good with my world and that is the feeling your words give me too. We should appreciate the simple things in life. Appreciation of little things can bring contentment in a world where there is such cruelty. We are but specks in the ocean of time. Your poetry, rich with its spiritual thread weaving through its warp and weft.
Thank you Mr E.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

you connect with me ... what a treasure ... God bless your stay and view from that bay window ... so.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

Sending all good wishes to you across the pond :)



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I am so happy to have come across your beautiful write this morning. It makes for a wonderful start to the day and a reminder that God is still in control. We can stew, worry and fret about all the things that seem to go wrong in life but at the end of the day, what a blessing to go to bed knowing that 'He's got this!' and can sleep peacefully. One of my worst traits is trying to save the world. I must remember that there is someone 'up there' who is more powerful than anything we know on this earth. Thank you for your words today dear E.

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Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

thank you for your review Dara ... its a rain all day today .. and i really don't feel much like bei.. read more
Your poetry a celebration of dawn rising. Your lines elevating my mood. As I respond to you the early sun floods through the upper bay window where we are staying for the week. All is good with my world and that is the feeling your words give me too. We should appreciate the simple things in life. Appreciation of little things can bring contentment in a world where there is such cruelty. We are but specks in the ocean of time. Your poetry, rich with its spiritual thread weaving through its warp and weft.
Thank you Mr E.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

you connect with me ... what a treasure ... God bless your stay and view from that bay window ... so.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

Sending all good wishes to you across the pond :)
mountain's root and nerve the
oceans' poise ....................
I see .................
an undying accord
a persistent rapport

Just one of the many bells that resonate throughout your amazing tribute. The whimsy of big dogs to big God, and the seriousness of philosophy run like a stream bisecting every line.

Glory, upon glory.

V

Posted 1 Month Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

thank you for reading with mind and heart and spirit ..that's what it's all about isn't it ... so gl.. read more
The majesty of dog poop... amused and also impressed that you can find beauty there. How do you bear to shovel it up and throw it out?
Seriously, as a devout believer, I think this is a beautiful piece.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

so glad you see my intent ... oh... i bear it all right ... i have two very large dogs and their art.. read more
Very enjoyable poem in the countryside dog walking and savouring life and living.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Months Ago

yes ... certain moments stand out don't they?! when things in our heads slow to a stop and we realiz.. read more
Dawn

5 Months Ago

My pleasure. Thanks E. For sharing.
I admire this. It's sense of certain. While there are those of us who question, especially in times of dark ... nicely done

Posted 5 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Months Ago

what a treat to have your visits Lyn! thank you so much ... yes...Faith it is that lights up any dar.. read more
How big thou art, oh God and greater still tis true.. He tauhgt us how to live and love each other too! He gave the world to us for us to appreciate His goodness and His might. ... He made the lame to walk and gave to some new sight!


Posted 5 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Months Ago

how delightful to read your review...praising Almighty God ... all so true :) are we just meeting? m.. read more
kitty

5 Months Ago

Peace & Love returned. Thanks!
Philistine that I am, E., I chuckled all the way through this dissertation. As one who sallies forth with a collection of "Doggy" bags twice a day, I often say "Oh ,God", as I unwittingly demolish another fecal cairn nestling in the long grass.
N.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Months Ago

ahahahah ..you feel me then eh!? ;))))) its an instant connection we dog slaves have ... we are cert.. read more
Wonderful prayer in your poem. I like how you express your feeling through the simple words . Its have quiet strong impact on reader . Cause we can feel all your honesty, true faith forward to god.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

thank you for taking time and so nice to meet you! I will have to visit your pages as well asap! God.. read more
Being in harmony with nature may just be the best way to "feel" God. Loved how the words felt like a soothing flow of a river and just seem to hang together naturally.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Months Ago

thanks "T" and nice to meet you! so gratifying to share my morning with my dogs, nature and God ...o.. read more

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