In Loving God

In Loving God

A Poem by Einstein Noodle

In Loving God


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I let the dogs out this morning  
the sky still dark
the windbreeze pressing the moist fog to my face and mind
it smells like fresh hung linens
the dogs offer lakes and rivers
leave fertile architectures ..... shapes like
The Tower of Pisa, 
                                   the Pantheon,
Pyramids and sprawling ranches ...
they are big dogs with plenty of supplies

thank you oh Lord ... thank you oh Lord
taking once more a deep precious breath 
of my life.

Towers hoisted against forbearing sky - 
mountain's root and nerve the
 oceans' poise ....................
I see .................
an undying accord 
a persistent rapport
The dog chases the trails of nightfall and
I inhale the scents: perpetuity on mortality
So, thank you, oh Lord, for every deep breath of my life

How can one express such splendor 
such vast an expanse in the smallest of life
green shoots and sprouts
clear, clean ice drops .................
one drop of God
on seeking tongues
on bending oak and iron

when our heavy rain enfolds comfort arms
on weathered, rusted roofs ................
God's own assurance melds,
welds the bonds ............

How big you are 
Oh God.

E.
02/23/2018


© 2018 Einstein Noodle



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Einstein Noodle

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What a poem Mr.E! what a poem... the majestic splendour of dawn, its ever thrilling mystery, yes when the spirit is the nearest to the Whole, to God... just like Yours was, so blessed, so in love, so loving, so high, so pure... You don't know how to express this overwhelmed feeling... rich images filling Your poem and pour with richness, richness to fill our hearts with joy, walking with You in each of Your steps, and what a terrific last two verses, form the smallest, to the biggest, from the softest, to the strongest... He is always there!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

7 Months Ago

you stepped into my shoes Light ... so blessed by your sensitivity and for experienceing this poem t.. read more
Light

7 Months Ago

it's my sincere pleasure to leave a pleasurable review, and I too, nothing to ask more but this grat.. read more
Einstein Noodle

7 Months Ago

thanks again Light...you are very kind



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The majesty of dog poop... amused and also impressed that you can find beauty there. How do you bear to shovel it up and throw it out?
Seriously, as a devout believer, I think this is a beautiful piece.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

so glad you see my intent ... oh... i bear it all right ... i have two very large dogs and their art.. read more
Very enjoyable poem in the countryside dog walking and savouring life and living.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

yes ... certain moments stand out don't they?! when things in our heads slow to a stop and we realiz.. read more
Dawn

2 Months Ago

My pleasure. Thanks E. For sharing.
I admire this. It's sense of certain. While there are those of us who question, especially in times of dark ... nicely done

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

what a treat to have your visits Lyn! thank you so much ... yes...Faith it is that lights up any dar.. read more
How big thou art, oh God and greater still tis true.. He tauhgt us how to live and love each other too! He gave the world to us for us to appreciate His goodness and His might. ... He made the lame to walk and gave to some new sight!


Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

how delightful to read your review...praising Almighty God ... all so true :) are we just meeting? m.. read more
kitty

2 Months Ago

Peace & Love returned. Thanks!
Philistine that I am, E., I chuckled all the way through this dissertation. As one who sallies forth with a collection of "Doggy" bags twice a day, I often say "Oh ,God", as I unwittingly demolish another fecal cairn nestling in the long grass.
N.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

ahahahah ..you feel me then eh!? ;))))) its an instant connection we dog slaves have ... we are cert.. read more
Wonderful prayer in your poem. I like how you express your feeling through the simple words . Its have quiet strong impact on reader . Cause we can feel all your honesty, true faith forward to god.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

thank you for taking time and so nice to meet you! I will have to visit your pages as well asap! God.. read more
Being in harmony with nature may just be the best way to "feel" God. Loved how the words felt like a soothing flow of a river and just seem to hang together naturally.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Months Ago

thanks "T" and nice to meet you! so gratifying to share my morning with my dogs, nature and God ...o.. read more
“One drop of God”-what a beautiful image that is E.! I love your gentle, sweet, real poem. First verse with doggy activities made me laugh out loud. “God’s own assurance melds, welds- reverent line with spot-on alliteration. Lovely form, flow, vivid natural imagery, use of pauses ..........., rhythm. Like looking at a radiant microcosm of creation ...Last two lines so true and celebratory-Amen. Bravo my friend!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Months Ago

you made my day reading your kind and generous reviw...could not be more happy that something i wrot.. read more
Annette Pisano-Higley

5 Months Ago

Your poetry blesses me E. Thank you and blessings back to you.:))
Einstein Noodle

4 Months Ago

back at ya Annette ... truly :)
this is one great poem my friend, sometimes it is hard for me to write a spiritual poem because admittedly not all have the same religion that i have. and reading a spiritual poem like this inspires me more. God had bless us with everything and it is up to us to be contented with what we have. I am glad that you are also a dog lover.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Months Ago

there is but one God ..we can all speak to that eh!? and one Savior given to us, Jesus Christ ... an.. read more
sette

5 Months Ago

thanks so much my friend
Einstein Noodle

5 Months Ago

nooooooooo thank you!! ;))
I feel guilty after reading this. Your joyous shouts of expression of grand gratitude of the divine are rippled in my mind of just knowing the dogs were not alone making yellow Architectures in the snow.. It's the first time I could see visions of a "River Maker" creating works of art lmbo . No doubt the glistening Sun was an amazing glistening stream to behold from the "River Maker" Oh boy.... glad i wasn't there. I would not of been able to contain myself either.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Months Ago

your exuberant review makes me smile Kate! and where the heck have you been?? you should feel guilty.. read more

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