Fear

The deep blue surrounds me.

The monster's arms pull me in. 

I try to take a breath, 

But my world is growing dim.

He suffocates me quietly, 

Not giving any slack.

I open my mouth to scream, 

But the screams are all pushed back. 

The dark liquid filled my lungs

And my life was quickly fleeting.

I finally faced my fear, 

But I was taking quite a beating. 

'You'll feel fulfilled',

'The fear can't win', 

But these words mean nothing

When the waters pulling you in...

Reviews

[Camie Allen]

Wow.... Amazing Kristi... Just amazing....

[mariah]

hey, great job! it's very well written and i know alot of people will be able to relate to this. i esspecially love the last stanza.
-Mariah