Poison Heir

Hi everyone,

I have a number of chapters already completed, but still waiting for me to edit! I'll be posting them soon :)

Just looking for feedback regarding my writing style. My target audience will most likely been teens and I'm wondering whether my writing is too flowery?

Also - is the start a little cliché of the Dystopian genre? Or just teen plots in general, with the whole 'I'm in trouble with mum because I don't understand the meaning of responsibility' kinda protagonist?

Feedback is totally welcomed! I'm looking to get this published one day and would really appreciate any comments/criticism.

Thanks!