Await

Await

A Poem by the_stoic


the hope in your heart
awaits to be rekindled.

the thoughts of your mind
await to be understood.

the silence of your words
awaits to be comprehended.

the sweetness of your voice
awaits to be resounded.

the impressions of your smile
await to be minted.

the sense of your touch
awaits to be felt.

the depth in your eyes
awaits to be explored.

the beauty of your visage
awaits to be cherished.

the presence of your being
awaits to be treasured.

the void in your soul
awaits to be satiated.

The wait shall end with the one
the hope of being who, has dwindled in me
yet, I’ll trudge along on the sidelines
till the blessed soul comes in to hold your hand
forever, as it's destined to be...
~



© 2012 the_stoic



My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

Destined, a word - we hope to find in our lifetime. await on the sidelines - await for the one. yes we never know what is in store for us. We just have to wait and see. For one day we are destined to find hopefully that one. A poem of hope, yet longing to be there waiting to find that one - the one you are destined. A lovely piece. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_stoic

5 Years Ago

it's not about me finding 'the one'. It's about my lady finding the one for her, which i know i can .. read more
The Random Writings Of Me..Kates

5 Years Ago

You are welcome. And not necessarily about you , I can see, but yes anyone finding the one. Great pi.. read more



Reviews

Maybe this is your thoughts for someone else but your understanding of these hopes and ability to articulate them so eloquently is powerful in itself. This is an absolutely beautiful write. Enter this is contest and I think it will speak for itself. 100/100

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_stoic

5 Years Ago

thank you for your review mam !
Destined, a word - we hope to find in our lifetime. await on the sidelines - await for the one. yes we never know what is in store for us. We just have to wait and see. For one day we are destined to find hopefully that one. A poem of hope, yet longing to be there waiting to find that one - the one you are destined. A lovely piece. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_stoic

5 Years Ago

it's not about me finding 'the one'. It's about my lady finding the one for her, which i know i can .. read more
The Random Writings Of Me..Kates

5 Years Ago

You are welcome. And not necessarily about you , I can see, but yes anyone finding the one. Great pi.. read more
A amazing poem. We never know what may await us. Unless we take a chance. I like the flow of thoughts and the strong ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_stoic

5 Years Ago

thanks you for your words sir ! always appreciated :)
This is a really nice though t provoking poem and a really atmospheric photo to go with it - Like this, the end verse reads like a prayer

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_stoic

5 Years Ago

yes and a prayer it is mam for the one i love ~
thank you for stopping by :)

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

406 Views
4 Reviews
Rating
Added on September 28, 2012
Last Updated on September 28, 2012
Tags: love, loss, pain, hope

Author

the_stoic
the_stoic

India



About
i won't go about describing myself cause it'll end up as a self deprecatory saga .. my poems are there to speak for me . yesterday mp3 | lyricsfree music downloads | music videos | pictures Guda.. more..

Writing
One moment One moment

A Poem by the_stoic


the One the One

A Poem by the_stoic


no more... no more...

A Poem by the_stoic



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..