in lieu

in lieu

A Poem by the_stoic


a tinge of love
a dollop of pain


a moment of bliss
a lifetime of misery

a glimpse of your face
a bountiful dark embrace

a utopian dream abridged

a thousand tears ruffled anew

a transient sense of oneness
a perpetual collapse all through.





© 2012 the_stoic



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Best thing in this was, before even starting to read, I first checked if there was a symmetry in the number of lines or number of words.
Although I wasnt disappointed after reading the poem, cuz even without following any particular fashion, you expressed well.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_stoic

5 Years Ago

hmm.. i don't care about symmetry and all .. it's a literal outpour and i just let it flow ~
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Best thing in this was, before even starting to read, I first checked if there was a symmetry in the number of lines or number of words.
Although I wasnt disappointed after reading the poem, cuz even without following any particular fashion, you expressed well.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_stoic

5 Years Ago

hmm.. i don't care about symmetry and all .. it's a literal outpour and i just let it flow ~
<.. read more

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