Penumbra

Penumbra

A Poem by the_stoic


How my mind wanders
with the musings of your being
you'll never know.

How my body craves
to feel your sultry angelic touch
you'll never know.

How my eyes search
for an imprint of your composition

you'll never know.

How my heart aches
to be in sync with your beats
you'll never know.

How my soul yearns
to stay wrapped in your gossamer shadow
you'll never know.

You'll never know me my dear lady
and it's a conscious choice you've made
to shift me to the penumbra in your heart
that most of your emotions comfortably evade ~



















© 2012 the_stoic



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"How my body craves
to feel your sultry angelic touch
you'll never know.

How my eyes search
for an imprint of your composition
you'll never know."
woah, this is wonderful. I love your word choice in this piece, thank you for sharing :)

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the_stoic

5 Years Ago

glad that you liked it ! thanks
Brilliant...
You inspire me...:)

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the_stoic

5 Years Ago

thanks for the appreciation ~
A beautiful poem of love. The description took me on a good journey into emotion and thankfulness. A wise person is thankful when someone is willing to share time and love with. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
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the_stoic

5 Years Ago

your words are so true sir ! thanks for stopping by ..
This is intensely delivered and a pleasure to read, good to see you xoxo

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the_stoic

5 Years Ago

thank you
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I love the use of the Penumbra ... the last stanza stands out because of a difference in the style of writing ....its almost like u are speaking it out urself

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the_stoic

5 Years Ago

and finally you leave behind a comment :)
Oh, wow. I don't really know what to say, this was really good. Your language is wonderful.

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the_stoic

5 Years Ago

thank you for your words friend !

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the_stoic

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