WHAT AM I?: Nephilim WHAT AM I?: Nephilim
A teen boy gets killed, but trades his soul for another chance. He changes. A girl notices the new boy with silver eyes.
I knew my <3

I knew my <3

A Poem by the_stoic



one word
one epiphany
one heart beat
one expression
one vivid dream
one thought chain
one droplet of tear
one twitch of the soul

and i knew the 'one'
i knew my ~
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© 2012 the_stoic



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Nice repetition of the word "one'. Leading the reader into thoughts and a very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_stoic

5 Years Ago

thanks a lot sir for going through my write !
This short piece has a compelling confidence of self belief, its nice to read something like this

Posted 5 Years Ago


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the_stoic

5 Years Ago

yes it does :)
Leigh Green

5 Years Ago

;-) nice
This is so short and sweet!
I really love this, it's beautifully written
thank you for sharing! :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_stoic

5 Years Ago

came out in the spur of the moment . thanks for the read
This is so very beautiful. The way it is formatted and the font, it brings the eloquence of the piece all together. It is often just that "one" thing that brings it all together. Beautifully penned. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_stoic

5 Years Ago

thanks for your kind words :)
The Random Writings Of Me..Kates

5 Years Ago

Your welcome :)

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Added on September 30, 2012
Last Updated on October 4, 2012
Tags: love, pain, happiness, joy, realization, hope, despair

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the_stoic

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i won't go about describing myself cause it'll end up as a self deprecatory saga .. my poems are there to speak for me . yesterday mp3 | lyricsfree music downloads | music videos | pictures Guda.. more..

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