the One

the One

A Poem by the_stoic

 

The one

who gets delighted by the first rain

like a child.

 

The one

who dances to every tune

like a free spirit.

 

The one

who gets in sync with the beats

just as I do.

 

The one

who sanctifies the surroundings

with her smile.

 

The one

whose presence is therapeutic

for a battered soul.

 

The one

whom even the tests adjudge

a true caregiver.

 

The one

who inspires me every moment

to write for her.

 

The one

whom I crave to care for

like my own.

 

The one

whom I want happiness for

come what may.

 

The one

whose well being brings me

strength and peace.

 

The one

whose hand I hope to hold

as I grow old.

 

The one

without whom life will again be

a blank canvas.

 

The one

whom I have hurt too far

to even seek redemption.

 

The one

whose forgiveness I’ll still ask for

for I long to stay.

 

For she is the one and will always be

my muse, my lady..


 

 


© 2012 the_stoic



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This was really cute, I say. It's always good to have a free spirit and to find someone who has a free spirit just like yours. It's good to find a person who truly accpets you for who and as you are without any judgements. If you make eachother happy, then take a change with it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_stoic

5 Years Ago

thanks for the read mam :)
I Am Svetlana

5 Years Ago

Welcome :)



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Lovely piece and image it has a tempo to it that makes it dance along, thanks for the enjoyable read

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_stoic

5 Years Ago

thanks a lot for the read and the appreciation :)
A beautiful poem of love and desire. The repetition gave strength to the story in the poem. We need our muses. They keep us alive and well. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_stoic

5 Years Ago

yes sir for sure we do ! thanks for the read sir ..
Nice. Repetition of those words "The One" emphasize your message.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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the_stoic

5 Years Ago

thanks for the read .. glad to see you on WC
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Very romantic! Love is forever with "the One". I love how you have written the many ways she means the world to you. For me this has a universal feel, an unconditional love. Going in my favorites for sure!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_stoic

5 Years Ago

unfortunately for me 'the one' refused to be my lady .. anyways am glad that you liked the write . t.. read more
Amazing poem for the one who inspires your love and this a beautiful piece.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_stoic

5 Years Ago

thanks for the read mam .. always appreciated ~
Poetic Beauty

5 Years Ago

Anytime
What a beautiful and inspiring write. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_stoic

5 Years Ago

thanks for stopping by sir !
Jetta Zippora

5 Years Ago

You're welcome. And my name is Jetta...I'm a girl lol
This was really cute, I say. It's always good to have a free spirit and to find someone who has a free spirit just like yours. It's good to find a person who truly accpets you for who and as you are without any judgements. If you make eachother happy, then take a change with it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_stoic

5 Years Ago

thanks for the read mam :)
I Am Svetlana

5 Years Ago

Welcome :)
Awww, that's so sweet!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_stoic

5 Years Ago

thanks :)
Mizuki Tsukiakari

5 Years Ago

Your welcome :)
I like this a lot...pristine in it's mournful yet blissful deliverance...really nice xo

Posted 5 Years Ago


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