the Love bird

i guess with my lady gone so far, only the dove can let me know of her well being ...

 

      The eyes lit up as they see the dove
  and the heart puts up green leaves of desire
  It must be bringing a message from my love
   to caress and douse my raging soul on fire..

Reviews

[Tai Chi Italy Take Two]

Short, sweet, beautiful and so tuneful too. Final line classic in the height of romance.

Smiling at you

Tai

[Lydia Blackwell]

this is perfectly sweet and romantic. I can relate to feelings of interconnectedness.

[sarah]

This is stnning great work!

[RJM]

the sheer power of desire is inside all of us waiting to burn like a raging inferno for the one we love so much! a fire that if we are not careful would consume and destroy us

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

lovely movements~ languid and beautiful in aura~

[emmajoy]

Such an emotional piece of writing! The dove is seen as the bird of hope, God willing your words prove to be a small miracle .. I know you'd be overjoyed if one happened.

[Inkcognito]

These four lines embody a myriad of emotions... joy, desire, love, longing, yearning, sadness, but, most importantly, it speaks of hope...
Beautiful!

[Albatross]

So much is expressed in such a concise poem; hard to do, nevertheless you have done it! Beautiful work.

[Cherrie Palmer]

saying two things at once always makes for a great poem

[Cynthia]

a great short poem!
I agree with Coyote, its a challege to write a poem in 4 sentences,
but you have make it!
Nice ending, very nice written!