Reminiscence

Reminiscence

A Poem by the_stoic



























Sunshine on my shoulders always makes me high
though her memories at times bring in a sigh
If I could choose a time apt to bid adieu
morning it would be, replete with the dazzling dew
and in the moments that would be my last
the joys of love, I'll relive from my past ..

 



© 2011 the_stoic



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the_stoic
a random write .. so don't expect it to be great on literary terms .

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RJM
Makes me think of romance. I don't know why maybe because Valentine's is in the air or something. Still nice poem and beautiful words

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this one leaves me nostalgic..adding to my library !

Posted 6 Years Ago


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There is nothing random about this beautiful write my friend! I too love the dazzling dew lines...wow to romantics

Smiling at you

Tai

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Reflection can be a pleasant thing. The image you paint in this poem is stunning.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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A very nice poem. I like how you wrote. The last desire to be sunshine on your shoulders. A short poem with a very good message. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


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your poems are always filled with emotion ..melancholy but so enchanting...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful work! Love the imagery and the rhyme of this poem, and I love the picture as well! It really match with the poem!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This picture and poem are stunning great work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully written, I love the imagery as well.
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..If I could choose a time apt to bid adieu morning it would be, replete with the dazzling dew... great line


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Added on January 25, 2011
Last Updated on January 25, 2011
Tags: love, sunshine, death

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the_stoic

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