When

When

A Poem by Mia
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When was it?

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when was it?

when did you leave?

when was i left alone in the darkness?

when was i the only one there to deal with my pity?

when did i drown in my watery tears?

when did i know i would never be happy again?

when did i watch you take those steps away from me?

when was i left without a soul, just a crumbling body?

when was the day i released all my pain through releasing blood?

when was the time when i pressed the cold blade to my skin?

when did i let that same cold blade open up my skin?

when did that cold blade take my blood?

when did it take my soul?

when was it when those cuts let my soul disappear?

when did my soul leave me?

when did i die of embarrassment?

when did i never want to be seen again?

when did i lock myself in my room, flooding it up to the ceiling with my constant tears?

when was the day you left me?

© 2010 Mia


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Mia
Yeah, this isn't based on real life though, but no, I don't have amnesia :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ugh! So many questions!!!! I'm guessing u have amnesia? :P lol, anyway this was really sad. if this is about an ex-biyfriend, this is exhibit A why i am careful with my heart. Yet again, I've never been accepted by a guy...yet.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i like the idea of when because this just ask questions that should be answered.
i feel sorrow and anger for the speaker ... when did it take my soul?
nice :P

Posted 13 Years Ago



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