Helpless

Seeing you like that…

Sitting there around the mess

Tears falling clearing your face

From the sadness which hanging there

Between your wrinkles ...

And the worries hunting your brain

Seeing you in that way

Made my heart bleeding with sorrow

I hate to feel helpless ,

I hate watching you suffer

All what I can do

Is to wipe your tears by a tender touch

Of my wounded heart

To kiss your forehead and whisper

In your ears, "Dad don't worry

Everything will be alright"…

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very caring write, creates the scene so well, leading upto the compassion
at the end....
seeing parents as being strong is what we are used to, so seeing the reverse
can take getting used to, but all we can do is return some of the love they
gave us :)

[Dalia]

loved this one a lot
very tender and touching

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

^_^

[stephen dillon]

solid content you just need to work on your editing and grammer

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thanks :) I will

[Jeff]

Amazing piece!

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you Jeff :)

[kefaya barakat]

amazing

[Deron Alexis]

wow well expressed Hadeel well I know you have know problem with self expression but well done either way

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thanks but i don't know what do u exactly mean by the problem?

[Larry Dyson]

I think they meant"no problem" with expressing yourself?

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

I don't know maybe !

[Deron Alexis]

sorry no problem sorry waw and i call English my native language

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

hhhhhhh its ok ^_^ it happens my freind

[Deron Alexis]

lol it does

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

yeah :)

[Ahmad Cox]

Aww very sweet and compelling example of father son love. I really liked it.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

thanks :)

[Renée]

Oh Sweet luv...how you lift a parents heart with your compassion & love... You are have such a brightness in this world Hadeel !

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Oh god so sweet to hear this from you , i am honored by your comments :)

[Renée]

as I am honored to read your hearts song.. Blessing to you & your family ( :

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

^_^ (heart )