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Bo-Real-Is

A Poem by Hailey Juliet
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64.0601° N, 139.4320° W

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catch the spectre
capture the spirit
spite the sprite
enrapture the light

say we synchopate
our starving lungs
and satiate
our sadistic tongues
anachronistic to this here state
as we stare aghast with mouths agape

agape or agapé
i couldn't say
too distant 
too removed
too far away

© 2018 Hailey Juliet



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It took me a while to get your title, but now I'm seeing the dancing green lightwaves! As you've no doubt noticed, I love rhyming, rapping, & riffing as you've done here with a nicely unregimented style (always a treat to escape my own rigid confines). I love your wordplay, which knits together such delightful sounds while also imparting an imagination-tweaking message. You've selected some long-neglected words that I always love to see rolled out with fanfare (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Months Ago


Hailey Juliet

6 Months Ago

Haha, I'm glad you picked up those northern lights! They can be incredibly elusive, at least in my .. read more
Very nice movement of words dear Hailey. The lines short and sweet. Meaningful and left something for the reader to grasp. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


This could be a great wee rap song.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Hailey Juliet

6 Months Ago

You really think so? Lol
thanks for reading

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Added on January 17, 2018
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