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Total Clarity

Total Clarity

A Poem by Hailey Juliet
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"philosophize"
you figure

well i can't figure
out the difference be-
tween twelve and one,
why not thirteen?
at least buy me a drink first,
i'm done.
fun . . .

"rationalize"
you reckon

well i can't reckon
what i can't think
and if i'm being honest
i think it's oversimplifying it
to call ontology
a reckoning,
just saying . . .

"satisfied"
you suppose

well i suppose we could have been 
if you + i 
had about five days
and the motivation
to haul myself and
those boxes labeled,
'still alive'
down from my mother's place
up to that new apartment 
on fifth and king street,
or was it queen . . .

you know what i mean

© 2018 Hailey Juliet



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Between twelve and one is 'Happy Hour' and the drinks cheap and brain death neat! After that … the philosophical study of the nature of being, becoming, existence, or reality, as well as the basic categories of being and their relations doesn't matter anymore! And as for sharing in a new apartment - hope it's ground floor - shorter distance to throw out the trash - Ahhh what an inspiring write you have here - :-)

Posted 2 Months Ago


very intelligent writing.i love it

Posted 2 Months Ago


It's like clear where she's supposed to be but unclear how she got there, the maze that is her life is truly reflected in these words. It's supposed to be simple but is it really? I liked the write, this is how I viewed it.

Posted 3 Months Ago


haha spontaneous and witty..more like brilliant :)
Feel free to check Unchained or Vagabond u might like them..leave me a review why not :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


Sour and cringey
Just the way I like it.


Posted 3 Months Ago


This poem is wonderfully written, each stanza is beautiful and conveys such a depth of emotion.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Loved it! Very well written.

Posted 4 Months Ago


I get the feeling of walking into a room and catching one side of a phone conversation

Posted 5 Months Ago


I always like when a writer teaches me a great new word: ontology! Your rambling discourse sounds a little bit like overthinking, in a fun & entertaining way! I like the way you loosely structure your stanzas with a parallel form, but not a bit repetitive, as each one brings a whole new set of things to ponder. The details in the last stanza takes this to a different place, a cryptic place, where the reader is left wondering where's the "total clarity"!?!?! Great originality! (((HUGS))) fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Months Ago


has such a good scheme and flow...and leaves so many unanswered questions...if only i could unpack my old baggage, and fill my heart with new belongings...she may be one of them...but how tough it is to move on.
j.

Posted 6 Months Ago



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