Moonlit Serenade

Moonlit Serenade

A Poem by Diego
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Written one night during a quiet full moon evening.

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the skies are black with clouds thick and white
twinkling white dots scatter the top
upon the earth the Beams shine so bright
a Moonlit Serenade plays tonight
sounds of sirens echo through the air
caused by the large full Orb in the sky
there is a Cleanliness with each breath
the Music that the city conducts
is heard by Luna in her white tux
the Dreamland some begin to spectate
it lasts only a moment in time
this Moonlit Serenade in the sky
but Luna will always remember
when she went for a dance in the night

© 2009 Diego


Author's Note

Diego
Capitalization is on purpose!

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This is a good poem. The capitalziation is on a purpose, but why? I like the part about cleanliness with each breath...that added alot to the imagery. "her white tux" I like that. since you referred to the moon as a female, I am assuming the tuxedo would be the clouds in the sky? great job, I enjoyed reading this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow! This amazing and you have many beautiful lines in this poem. I love how Luna will always remember when she went for a dance in the night. It touched a string in my heart. Love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


That is very enchanting and very pretty. I do understand the capitalization too. Thank you for posting!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a good poem. The capitalziation is on a purpose, but why? I like the part about cleanliness with each breath...that added alot to the imagery. "her white tux" I like that. since you referred to the moon as a female, I am assuming the tuxedo would be the clouds in the sky? great job, I enjoyed reading this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The title makes me want to sigh =] Great work. I loved the entire picture you painted with your words. The poem does have its continuity issues but I suppose thats how it is suppose to be.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Diego
Diego

Tucson, AZ



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