Farmer Giles

Farmer Giles

A Poem by James Hall
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A small poem I wrote.

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Sitting on the train

Looking in pain

Shifting side to side

Irritable hide

Haemorrhoids

Haemorrhoids

© 2009 James Hall


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That gave you the tendency to be annoyed, a great fragment. The things - one doesn't speak about. You did and it was not unpleasant. Also the red color was hilarious. makes it complete. We won't now start a conversation, if we experienced such a pain ha ha ha but ! this was a something, this was really readable. creativeness is everything ! I liked it !

P.S. May I say, you have a typo there irritable - add one r
ciao
l.g.

Posted 15 Years Ago
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HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!! Absolutely hilarious....sorry...i probably shouldn't find it so funny.

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 Added on December 22, 2008
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James Hall
James Hall

Newcastle, United Kingdom



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