Thoughts within those thoughts..

Thoughts within those thoughts..

A Poem by Hamza
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about the times you spent with the one who once was your love

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Sometimes ... All we want is to sit all alone in a corner and think 
about whether the things that were important for us yesterday deserved 
so much importance or ... We just gave them too much thought 
unnecessarily... 

And the heart says ... "Yes, they were really the best things ... Had 
they not been there, you wouldn't have been what you are now..." 

Sometimes somebody's prayers become so special, that they put you to a 
course you could only dream about ... 

Rare.. Precious.. Pure.. Dreams.. Thoughts.. Prayers.. Blessings.. 
Love.. Life .. Us .. 




© 2012 Hamza



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the description pretty much fits with the write
but, the flow in the poem, generalizes the term.
so i would say it hovers over every aspect of life.
very thoughtful

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

4 Years Ago

Well, I tried to converge the thoughts to a single aspect ... Anyway thank you :)
Not looked at your profile but these words remind me of my early teens. Some elements of the words still ring true

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

4 Years Ago

:)
thanks ..
hogan

4 Years Ago

I did like your work by the way, forgot to mention that, just flicked out my thoughts first time
Hamza

4 Years Ago

:)
thank you again ...
God bless :)
Interesting thoughts. Keep writing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

4 Years Ago

thank you
happy writing :)

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Added on October 16, 2012
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Tags: Rare, Precious, Pure, Dreams, Thoughts, Prayers, Blessings, Love, Life, Us

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Hamza
Hamza

Jammu, Jammu & kashmir, India



About
Hamza .. that's me .. An Engineer by profession and a writer by Emotion ... I am 26... I am no different, I am not special .. I'm just a different face, and a few different fingerprints .. I am.. more..

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Sometimes ... Sometimes ...

A Poem by Hamza



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