You.. the Beautifully Cruel you ..

You.. the Beautifully Cruel you ..

A Poem by Hamza
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about someone i loved so dearly, a friend, a companion who didn't care about how much she meant to me ..

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beneath the stars
under the moonlight 
talking to each other 
for hours passing like seconds

we loved to be 
free from this world
in our own creation 
deep in our secret thoughts

you loved to hear
what i meant to say 
and i in turn did
smile on your innocent words

your realizations, were so precious
and my loads of thoughts endless
so much to say each day
and hear, if nothing, then your beautiful voice

and one day you forgot
i too had a heart
you walked away without a word
forever to, break me apart ... 

and i still do 
miss you a lot ..  

 

© 2012 Hamza


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"your realizations, were so precious
and my loads of thoughts endless"

This is so beautiful. I also love the line "and one day you forgot I too had a heart." It really expresses the pain of loss and how dearly you miss the person and what you once had. Wonderfully done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

11 Years Ago

oh thank you Kelsey :)
and yes you got tit right , the lines you mentioned are the heart to th.. read more



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oooh ouch! he cruelty of ignorance of someone's feelings - or perhaps indifference. Very well put Hamza

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

11 Years Ago

Thank you and I guess indifference would fit in better ... :)
thank you very much !!
the heart of all this is this line
*and one day you forgot
i too had a heart*
brilliant poetry !!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for those words :)
"your realizations, were so precious
and my loads of thoughts endless"

This is so beautiful. I also love the line "and one day you forgot I too had a heart." It really expresses the pain of loss and how dearly you miss the person and what you once had. Wonderfully done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

11 Years Ago

oh thank you Kelsey :)
and yes you got tit right , the lines you mentioned are the heart to th.. read more
Such a sweet poem! I really enjoyed the first stanza!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

11 Years Ago

thanks a lot :)

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Added on October 17, 2012
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Tags: love, life, moon, stars, thoughts, pure, realizations, loads, heart, miss you

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Hamza
Hamza

Jammu, Jammu & kashmir, India



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Hamza .. that's me .. An Engineer by profession and a writer by Emotion ... I am 26... I am no different, I am not special .. I'm just a different face, and a few different fingerprints .. I am.. more..

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