Life Phases...

Life Phases...

A Poem by Hamza
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when you make someone face something and then quote about it as if it has happened to you .. i'm amazed ..

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There was a time when life was just life...
There were moments we wanted to stop forever...
There were days we cherish and long for....

Life was a pretty big bowl of roses to pick from...
Life was a basket of joy and emotions to choose from...

Every second that we spent, was a second so beautiful..
Every moment that passed along smiled along upon us...

Priorities remained little, everything was spontaneous ...
We lived life in a bliss of the spot thoughts...

But nothing remains forever in our hand...
Its like sand slipping continuously through...

We were alone , and will always be...
Rest is just an illusion, a method set by Him...

To remember and cherish all the good times ...
In the times when nothing goes good...

Until,
Life again becomes life...

© 2012 Hamza



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Very nice imagery and metaphor, especially in the "Life was a pretty big bowl of roses..." line. I liked it ;P Although, and sorry for criticizing, I feel like the "sand slipping away" metaphor is a little bit cliche. But to each his own. Overall, I really liked it :D Great job!!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

5 Years Ago

oh yes you're right but it was flowing and i couldn't resist penning it down ...
thank you fo.. read more



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this is too good.
Life
Joy
Emotions
Sadness
Life
how clearly has the life cycle been described. i sense a sweet emotion behind this write. good work !

Posted 5 Years Ago


Something very deep in these thoughts, I like intensely....

Posted 5 Years Ago


Beautiful, as always. Love reading your work

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

5 Years Ago

thank you :)
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I really liked this piece. It takes you on a mini journey. Ends on a note of hope... I liked that...

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

5 Years Ago

thank you :)
Very nice imagery and metaphor, especially in the "Life was a pretty big bowl of roses..." line. I liked it ;P Although, and sorry for criticizing, I feel like the "sand slipping away" metaphor is a little bit cliche. But to each his own. Overall, I really liked it :D Great job!!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

5 Years Ago

oh yes you're right but it was flowing and i couldn't resist penning it down ...
thank you fo.. read more
Very nice piece, really makes you think about the changes we're faced with in life, and how differently we all handle them. Lovely job. x

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

5 Years Ago

thank you so much kelsey .. :)
Yes time does indeed seem to slip through our hands, but what we have left is meant to be cherished and lived to the fullest despite what troubles may arise... thought provoking, life is life. Love the sad note at first then ending on a happy, little tune. True piece through and through ;)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

5 Years Ago

you understood it pretty well ...
thanks a lot ...
Castonovia

5 Years Ago

No problem :p
*Life again becomes life*
sweet, and this prove s you are very talented

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

5 Years Ago

thank you zammy .. :)
Morning Hamza, this is a very well constructed piece that simply flows from the page. It has a real melancholy feel to it despite the hopeful ending. The opening stanza is gripping.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

5 Years Ago

thank you so much John ... :)
beautiful dreamer

5 Years Ago

your welcome
Wow this is really good i love it so much im going to shelf it

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

5 Years Ago

haha
thank you very much !!

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Hamza
Hamza

Jammu, Jammu & kashmir, India



About
Hamza .. that's me .. An Engineer by profession and a writer by Emotion ... I am 26... I am no different, I am not special .. I'm just a different face, and a few different fingerprints .. I am.. more..

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