Life Phases...

when you make someone face something and then quote about it as if it has happened to you .. i'm amazed ..

There was a time when life was just life...

There were moments we wanted to stop forever...

There were days we cherish and long for....

Life was a pretty big bowl of roses to pick from...

Life was a basket of joy and emotions to choose from...

Every second that we spent, was a second so beautiful..

Every moment that passed along smiled along upon us...

Priorities remained little, everything was spontaneous ...

We lived life in a bliss of the spot thoughts...

But nothing remains forever in our hand...

Its like sand slipping continuously through...

We were alone , and will always be...

Rest is just an illusion, a method set by Him...

To remember and cherish all the good times ...

In the times when nothing goes good...

Until,

Life again becomes life...

Reviews

[Becca Bishop]

Very nice imagery and metaphor, especially in the "Life was a pretty big bowl of roses..." line. I liked it ;P Although, and sorry for criticizing, I feel like the "sand slipping away" metaphor is a little bit cliche. But to each his own. Overall, I really liked it :D Great job!!!

[Hamza]

oh yes you're right but it was flowing and i couldn't resist penning it down ...
thank you for your kind words though :)

[quinfinn]

this is wonderful! you have described some of the lighter nuances of a new love to perfection here. great write.

[Hamza]

thank you so much .. :)

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

there is no comparison to the starting line of the poem and explained the life very well :)

[Hamza]

thank you Ibraheem ... :)

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

mp :)