Interest and passed glory

Interest and passed glory

A Chapter by TheCreativityItself
"

stageplay

"

Dear me,

You come to me with interest, everybody comes to me with interest. But when they've reach me, I scare them off. 

So yes, go away again, everyone goes away. They come near me and go away immediately, with fear in their eyes.
Gosh, I repeat myself a lot.

When I have stopped writing to you, when my pencil is too little and the ink is empty, then…well then you’re gone too because I’m not interesting by then anymore.

Yes when my ink is empty the story is done, my story will be finished, dusty and moldy in the closet. Then there will be nobody here, then you won’t be there.
                            I won’t be there.

But it’s okay, because I’m happy... really… and you will make friends, have fun, meet someone nice, you will marry, have children and life happily ever after.

I will stay here and let you shine.

I am passed glory.

Sincerely,

Yourself.



© 2012 TheCreativityItself


Author's Note

TheCreativityItself
This one is based on last review of Coyote. I hope he'll appreciate it.
I hope you all will 'enjoy' it.

My Review

Would you like to review this Chapter?
Login | Register




Featured Review

I believe life will fall into place. All of us feel alone sometime in a life. I desire loneliness for 5 years. To gather and re-gain my mind and some logic. I like the ending to this chapter. A excellent chapter. I like the format and the way you are writing this tale.
Coyote

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheCreativityItself

11 Years Ago

Thank you, I really appreciate it.
After reading this chapter, I realized it looked like your .. read more
TheCreativityItself

11 Years Ago

it is very important having* everything



Reviews

"I will stay here and let you shine." This sentence really speaks volumes to me. As a reader I can relate to my past self and the pain it has felt.

Good job.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


TheCreativityItself

11 Years Ago

I hope it doesn't sound too awful, I don't want people to feel all the pain they've suffered in thei.. read more
A melancholy tune of a lonely self inside an encapsulating body that is no longer recognizable, leaving the parts of you that you feel are dragging, and yet those parts depict a voice you are sorrowful to part with. On a grammar point 'I scare them of'-"I scare them off'.
But very emotive and powerful the want for isolation and parting of self sings a bitter tune of dispassionate desolation. I like it.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheCreativityItself

11 Years Ago

Thank you Silent Verses, as I said to Coyote, your review is really helping me! After writing someth.. read more
I believe life will fall into place. All of us feel alone sometime in a life. I desire loneliness for 5 years. To gather and re-gain my mind and some logic. I like the ending to this chapter. A excellent chapter. I like the format and the way you are writing this tale.
Coyote

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheCreativityItself

11 Years Ago

Thank you, I really appreciate it.
After reading this chapter, I realized it looked like your .. read more
TheCreativityItself

11 Years Ago

it is very important having* everything
So very sad, I hope this doesn't happen in real life! Not like me... I had quite a rough childhood... Infact I'm still living the pain.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


It's sad...., but still very beautiful. Well done, I'm proud of you :)

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

320 Views
5 Reviews
Rating
Added on June 22, 2011
Last Updated on September 26, 2012
Tags: stageplay


Author

TheCreativityItself
TheCreativityItself

Alphen aan den Rijn, Netherlands



About
I love reading, writing, acting, painting, dancing en singing :) I am just being myself var wp_user="HananjaBreedveld";var wp_size=0; more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


The Author The Author

A Poem by Thea


Room 8611 Room 8611

A Poem by Tasha