Hug

Hug

A Poem by New Dawn

I gave you a hug

because you needed one

and my arms were wide enough


© 2012 New Dawn


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Nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Smiling. No other reason was needed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lovely says it all in three lines.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I gave you a humbug
because you needed one
And,
Because you're worth it.

I'm still smiling & I read this gem half an hour ago. Thanks. All Good Things, Neville

Posted 11 Years Ago


New Dawn

11 Years Ago

Glad you liked it - there has been so much positive response regarding this piece which goes to show.. read more
Neville

11 Years Ago

Dun it & gonna do it again until my arms ache. All Good Things, N
Hugs are one of my favorite things on earth. I feel like I just got one. :) Nice write you have here.

Posted 11 Years Ago


New Dawn

11 Years Ago

thank you so mmuch :)
Doreen

11 Years Ago

You're welcome.
:-)

:-)

and

:-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


New Dawn

11 Years Ago

see - everybody understands a hug :)
Distant horizons

11 Years Ago

huggles rock :-)
This poem feels like a verbal hug! Precious and complete. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


New Dawn

11 Years Ago

thank you Claire - sometimes a hug is all thats needed :)
Shimmerbliss/CAF

11 Years Ago

So very true! :)
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. ohhhhhhh ... i love love more because you wrote this piece ... there's so much love in these words ... such a beautiful piece of poetry, dear shelley ... oh, i love it so much ...

Posted 11 Years Ago


New Dawn

11 Years Ago

Thank you serah - Sometimes less is more - couldn't add to it because it already said what I wanted .. read more
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11 Years Ago

. it's a perfect solitaire ... that'll sparkle forever ... you wrote magic potion ... and thank .. read more

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Added on August 30, 2012
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New Dawn
New Dawn

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I have always written to some extent. seem to be leaning toward poetry at moment. In my other existance I am a nurse , wife , mother of three. Just like to share and get back some constructive critici.. more..

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