Tears of Incubus

Let the lilies bloom in winter
And the autumn live in summer.
To rot the hour in time and age,
So send the day to mournful page.

Hear the paean of lark at night,
The emblem of Icarus' flight.
Steal the tears of yesterday's dream,
Drown its sorrow in crystal stream.

Let the lilies bloom in May
Like the autumn that lived today.
To have a glimpse of stars asleep,
That silenced all the sounds of weep.

Make the worries rot like the rose,
So lonely in the eyes of foes.
In far off hill so proud it stood,
And sent to death the dreary mood.

Reviews

[Katelyn]

Well written poem. There was a great flow and the words all fit together nicely. Great job! 100/100

[dan nacario]

thank you..

[Serenity Faith]

what a deep piece with tinge of a beautiful sadness...it has a dark elegance to it....simply wonderful ^_~

[dan nacario]

thanks..

[The Scholar]

The words you chose for the poem were amazing; beautiful, talented piece. Remarkable flow, and I love the commands given in the first line of each stanza. Nicely done.

[Queen Empress]

Beautiful poem :)

[Kuhr Gred]

beautiful... i fell the flow of your emotion.. :) great work :)

[MandaBear]

beautiful as always