Love

Yearning for love

What should I do now, unknowingly
I have loved you and it is the only flaw,
That is present in my sketch,
Once I met and beguiled myself,
Everyday, every hour and in each passing
minute, I yearned you to be in me,
Unable to see the existential self, I
twisted and moulded again the rationality,
Ever I now that you are not for me,
You are not able, nothing you can offer me,
No fascinations what about charms, but
I made an orbit and started revolving you,
you flinched and cover thyself with principles,
Principles, I laughed, I need them spiritually
But not biologically, but who wants to be
Divine instead of materialistic
You flung and I become cold, I questioned
What worth is all this, It is not love,
Love is not in achievement, it is in sacrifice,
love is everywhere, no need to find it,
It is in humanity, it is in almighty
Love them all and be a part of love,
But what should I do of this soul
And flesh also, who are avarising
Not for humanity, not for almighty,
But for you to be in me

Reviews

[Jordan]

I enjoy this poem because it blends well the concepts of love and philosophy. It's simply different -
the style of writing is a bit erratic and the poem emanates an air of insanity. Personally I relate to this, so I couldn't resist.

Good job, mate :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks jorden :)

[Shiny]

I loved this beautifully written Poem on love. Great work. Sums up everything.

[Bala Gorthi]

Yes, that is what love really is. Nicely written craft. I loved reading this touching write.
Well done Hardeep! Keep sharing.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thank you so much

[Dead]

This is really well written :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

thank you so much

[Jesse Booker]

I see how this got 3rd place in the contest you entered! Well done!

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much

[Briana O'Connor]

I love the insanity you express that lies within love. very well written

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot briana :)

[Rich13White]

Philosophy of love...

[hardeep sabharwal]

:) thanks rich13white

[Prabha Salimath]

It looks your words for love are apt.
It is more attractive you are conscious about almighty, humanity and soul.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot Prabha salimath

[Prabha Salimath]

You are welcome.

[Patrick]

You write with such heart and conviction. This one is breathtaking. Very good

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thank you so much patrick

[R Smith]

I need this in my library, it is so beautiful, thank you Hardeep

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot :)