Conversation

Hindi version published in Delhi magazine in may 2005 issue Translations of poetry are always not so convincing and bad part of this, I am a worst translator

What we speak in chats, commonly,
May it be socio-political
Or on some family matters and disputes
If all those words are divided
Into sections and evaluated
Nine out of ten seem worthless
Absurdily, wasting age on time parameters,,
What we speak in chats,, the same common part
Which seem worthless
Actually nourishing life
Watering with the nectar of innocence
Craving something, somewhere
Slowly transforming its worthlessness
Into nonpareil, in context of life.

Reviews

[M.A.Rathore]

That's very great to count all the absurd talk between the two takes place instead of conversing on sensible issues. This really a fine poem of great value.i.e. the time. We have so many issues for discussions and deducing infrences on them for the welfare of someone viz.our society...
Thanks for sharing such nice with finest message...Hardeep

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou sir

[M.A.Rathore]

Welcome always my dear. It's duty .I am obliged for it...

[Jesse Booker]

I've never been a fan of small talk. Very nice read!

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much jesse

[Sindu]

Loads of time and energy drained in the meaningless chatter.. Depending on the context, it takes life as you described. A useful piece of advice, this one!

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot :)

[Cindy Marietta]

So true, theres such a difference between small talk and conversation

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot Amanda

[Baby Ricochet]

Talking s**t is a free flowing art form. Like poetry

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks Baby ricochet

[stars are far]

yup thats very true, well done

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot :)

[stars are far]

always my pleasure :)

[raj24]

you are right..many of things we say..words we use simply look meaningless but they are the very core of life..the way we connect with each other...nicely written..words as the two sides of coin..

Raj

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot Raj

[R Smith]

I guess conversation is the lifeblood of some folk and a lot can be wasted on things of no consequence but it stimulates the brain and inspires the writer, a remarkable poem Hardeep thank you :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks Richard for a nice review :)

[Erana]

Is n`t our mind always looking for something to absorb, something to process.
I enjoyed the way you use the words to post a poem where everyone discuss the worth of chat.
We listen and learn or listen and ignore.
Most of the time people just listen but don `t hear a thing at all.
Nice work
~E

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks Erana,, for reading and reviewing :)

[Briana O'Connor]

Its amazing that when seemingly insignificant things are place in the right order become priceless. Beautiful sentiment. Thank you for sharing.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot Briana :)