Remembering The Angel

Remembering The Angel

A Poem by hardik
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This is the first time I've written in my happy state. Hope its good

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A still moment in the sun
Waiting the wait just for anyone
Hoping for a hand that slips into mine with ease
Stopping for an instant the blowing breeze
A hush a sigh escape my lips
The cold air by my palm gives me creeps
The sheer vastness of the valley below
And the shining sun's silent glow
The feeling of utter loneliness
No one here to care or caress
A deep sadness has engulfed my heart
Nature's creation more than just art
Calm and peace of the green
Has no effect on me that can be seen

The hand I once dreamt of is now gone
I'm feeling so heartless like a stone
That hand was never mine to hold
Which was what I was always told
I always refused to believe those words
Made the same mistake like all the nerds
Waited for that girl who was perfect in all ways
My face reddens whenever I meet her gaze
That smile gives my heart immense peace
Her playful company always a tease
Her beauty is infinite
I smile everytime she enters my sight

I dont really care if she is mine
As long as she is happy and adorn with a smile
She's a true angel in my life
I'd really have loved to have her as my wife
But destiny was not meant for that to happen
But my hopes will never dampen
I only want her to be in joy
With a child a girl or a boy
Her memories are all thats left now
I dont know what happened and how
But here in the nature's bliss I stand
Thinking of her making me smile so grand
I just hope she knows that I'm here
Waiting for her now and forever

© 2013 hardik



Author's Note

hardik
Please tell me how it is. I want to show it to the one I love

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I really like this! I wrote something like this, I might put it up so u could see it.
Well placed words


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hardik

4 Years Ago

Surely. Do put it up and thanks for the review :-)
Wow...that left me speechless. It is a very beautiful poem.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hardik

4 Years Ago

Thank You :-)
The memory of what once was. Well done :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nicely expressed feelings, good poem.Thanks for sharing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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hardik
hardik

Rajkot, India



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I am a medical student. I like to express my feelings in the form of poems more..

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