Love and Computers

Love and Computers

A Poem by hardluckbaby

It all started the moment you turned me on
My fingers were racing, I couldn't ctrl
We just clicked.

But why did you just leave me hanging?
It was you who wasn't responding
You said your love just shut down.

You said you couldn't function and you needed space,
You needed an escape, a pause, a break
Well I just wanted us to be home at the end of the day.

But you closed the door and I couldn't open a window
Why can't we be back to zero, so we be one again? (hah! binary system!)
I could be your UPS, please don't let it die down.

Here I am, still dwelling in safe mode
I tried and tried but we can't restart
You've already reformatted.

© 2011 hardluckbaby


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Aww! This is adorable, I love the references to computers :-) Very witty and cute

Posted 12 Years Ago


Haha!! I love this... Really creative!! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


real witty. loved it! :)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


ooo I Loved this!
This is wonderful!
Loved the whole thing, it's just so creative!
This is truly truly amazing!
:) 100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago



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hardluckbaby
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writer of poems of love and daily ramblings about life i'm a fan of wordplays. feel free to send requests and i will try to give my 2 cents (and hope it helps) about your work :) more..

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A Poem by hardluckbaby