Missing

Two people in love separated by war.

She waits for him day and night

He has been gone for a year

He has gone to fight in a war in order to to keep their freedom

He would tell her every night that he adores her

She waits patiently for him

She keeps and reads his letters every night

He does the same

Every afternoon she goes to the field where they met and waits for him

Her long brown hair and faded blue dress blows in the wind

He also goes into a field  and hopes to be with her soon

He closes his eyes and he feels that she is there with him

She does and feels the same

One day the will be together but until that day, they dream and wait patiently

He would give up everything to be with her again

She would do the same

Reviews

[willweb]

Very good poem. Quite sad. I enjoyed reading this today.

[Crystal Ellyson]

Thank You. This is my first poem that was ever wrote.

[Pax]

Cute and sweet, I sense the longing for a love one that is far away. a very interesting piece... soldiers at war, lover afar... :)

[Crystal Ellyson]

Thank you for the comment, this was actually my first poem I have ever wrote.

[Pax]

oh, that's pretty nice for a first time, please do keep writing... it gets better, i know it... and your welcome :) and welcome to wc!