I Never stop trying...

never ever give up... fill your mind with positive thoughts; have an "i can do it" spirit n believe me it'll work wonders!!!!!

I walk, I run,

I jump, I fall 

And I get hurt

Still I stand up again

And continue my efforts!

I search, I fumble,

I rummage, I mumble

And I never find the thing

Yet I don't grumble

And start it all aver again!

I work, I slog,

I study, I strive,

And I sometimes flunk

Don't get to the top

So what? 

There's always a next chance!

I talk, I shout,

I scream, I protest,

Yet no one pays any heed;

So I again clear my throat

Ready to get myself heard!

I try and try

Have fun and enjoy;

Sometimes I do fail

Yet I don't cry.

Then happiness chases me,

Things become finer,

And there I emerge

As an unbeatable winner!

Reviews

[The Perfectionist]

This poem reads just weird. It's like it wants to have a rhythm, but you're insisting on making it not have one. I like it, but I think it would be much improved if you rewrote it either sticking to the rhythm that keeps trying to develop or just abandoning the half-completed structure altogether.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this poem. Nice emotion and everything. It also helps me want to better myself. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Abhinav]

Cool, just my motto in life to... win or die trying
very very inspiring and an excellent poem

[deeps]

This is a very touching and inspiring write.
I Like this it's a very enjoyable read.

[loverly9316]

i love this it is inspiring to me to never give up and you ill have a positive outcome i like this oh yeah and good job cuz some people are lazy and like to plagerize(how ever you spell that lol)

[Thomas Fleet]

Your work is often inspiring and touching, especially this one.
How you think can affect how you live and certain outcomes.
Good work. :)

[MusicJunkie66]

More and more people should be optimistic like you, great poem!!

[An owl on the moon]

This is so encouraging, for times will always come to knock us down... We show what's inside us by rising up every time... This is victory.. to go on. You express this so well!

[A.Lee]

This is good. I like the way the first two lines of each stanza are written. And of course the message behind the poem. Well done.

[St.Jimmy]

that's the spirit!
that's the spirit of a true winner
this boosts up the positive attitude and the attitude of not giving up, keep on striving and never loosing hope among the reader
I love your choice of words
~Aaradhya