When I Don't Think

When I Don't Think

A Poem by Mir
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Hmm

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I've notice my works better,
when I don't think.
The words just seem to flow,
like faucet out of a sink. 

Maybe it's because,
I'm unaware of what I'm saying. 
My subconscious must know,
of the words I should be creating. 

I tend to over-think a lot;
over-analyzing is a talent. 
Maybe it's because I let my mind go;
not caring if people understood what I meant. 

What ever the reason,
it works out in the end. 
Just need to relax,
and let the words mend. 

© 2013 Mir


Author's Note

Mir
Please don't comment on punctuation unless there's something that doesn't follow the pattern. I wrote it the way I did on purpose.

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This is great and yes oh so true it we would just let go and allow the words to flow from us like a river to a stream. Beautifully written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Added on January 4, 2013
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