Who ArE yOU?

to a "friend" im questioning his trust.

who ArE yOU

 

So confused

  On what to do

    I caught a vibe

       One of Deceit

 It dosent make sence

 

                                Who are you?

     

Are you talking?

    I cant hear you

        You tell me no

            What about them

                   Can they hear you

                           I think they can

                               Its what i feel in my heart.

 

You lay next to the enemy

             As you sleep at night

 

What are you hiding from?

 

Fear and fright

       As you lie in bed

                            Awake

                                Contemplating

             Who you are

 

Who are you?

           I DONT KNOW

 

                                      Do you think

                               About me while siting

   in your cell

 

How you have

         confused me

             betrayd me                                      

                    and for what?             

Reviews

[*Kantola*]

Wow... I can SORT OF relate to this.
Knowing someone, and having them betray your trust, or betraying you in general.
It had a nice flow to it. The colors really made it pop out :D
Nice job, i enjoyed it

[frogbean]

please point out anything wrong and feel free to give ur opinion.
FrOgBeAn