I Hate You More Than Painting

This was the same English assignment, only I got extra credit for this one. :)

I hate you more than painting
A color on a wall,
For every time I need more paint,
You never heed my call.

I hate you more than drawing
A bird that takes to flight,
For every time it turns out well,
You always pick a fight.

I hate you more than working
On what to draw or paint,
For our bond used to be darker,
But now it's growing faint.

Author's Note

I didn't write this for anyone, but tell me what you think anyway.

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

I like your poem a lot. My only suggestion would be to correct the punctuation or don't use any. It should read like this:

I hate you more than painting
A color on a wall,
For every time I need more paint,
You never heed my call.

I hate you more than drawing
A bird that takes to flight,
For every time it turns out well,
You always pick a fight.

I hate you more than working
On what to draw or paint,
For our bond used to be darker,
But now it's growing faint.

[Angela ☄️]

I think it's cute. :)

[R E Tree]

Makes me want to paint and I don't usually paint as I have a interest in art I love to draw.

[Lexi Nicole]

Very nicely written. Very creative. It has a good flow and some really good emotions in it. Nice work!

-Howl