impefect

impefect

A Poem by 5John17
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imperfect

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We think with our minds,

Yet we act based on emotions.

We try to be logical,

but we can`t help acting illogically.

We try to love one another,

but we always end up hurting one another.

We can`t do anything successfully, without losing something first.

Are we not weak?

Do we not hurt each other just by living?

© 2016 5John17


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Welcome to writerscafe..I am very much looking forward to reading more of your works

Posted 7 Years Ago


I liked this poem, especially the last two lines. Very nice ^^

Posted 7 Years Ago



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5John17
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