Another Beautiful Girl

She is just another lost soul in a crowd of people

More they ignore her, the addiction spirals deeper

If only they could see her

How the silver sliver pierces her

 

If only they could see her

She has so much heart

So far from home

Could you watch the infection grow?

 

I despise you for letting her go

Someone from your world

Yet all you see is just another beautiful girl

 

Little do you know she is beaten and worn

Jaded and torn

What’s she got to be blooded for?

 

So I’ll let you know

If the world don’t want her

I’ll take her burdens alongside my own

So will a million more

Reviews

[Lost in Wonderland]

wonderfully written, full of sorrow, disbelief, disillusionment and the sense of wanting to protect her. Well done!

[SouthernBelle]

aw this is really sad :'(

[tamsin]

This is really sad : ( I feel really sorry for the girl.

[Felicity's Eve]

This is extremly lovely.
The concept is wonderful and this is very well-written.
Keep up the amazing work and I can't wait to read more.
P.s. I don't think that one can ever write too much! ;)

[Ruth]

Lovely detail...
What is someone's loss is another's gain!
:) xoxo

[write4ever]

great job!!!!!!!

[J. Viands]

thanks yo

[write4ever]

you are very welcome!!! keep up the good work!!!

[Steven Cash]

mmmm i am so tired right now, but I can still tell it's great

resend the read request so i can come back to this in the morning, please

[J. Viands]

will do