Observation

Observation

A Chapter by J. Viands

It’s hard to see anything,

When you’re not looking,

I’m not looking,

So I see nothing.

 

So much for observation,

When you’re not observing,

Rather creating,

What could this be based on?

 

Maybe quickening,

A beckoning,

To see everything,

Hastening,

 

My realization,

That I am observing

What I am seeing.

Are piece’s falling in to position?

 

Still I don’t think I am succeeding.

Not yet am I returning,

To a skill I am recalling.

It seems I am still struggling.    



© 2012 J. Viands


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Sometimes we think we are seeing, but it can be subjective in some circumstances. And then, there is the blind, leading the blind!

Posted 11 Years Ago


J. Viands

11 Years Ago

Good analyses might start using that when people ask me what it’s about thanks

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