sweetheart...

sweetheart...

A Poem by lonely poet

sweetheart...
 





sweetheart...

maybe the place here is so small...
to write more to you....
about my love ...
about the love which i keep for you...
about the perfume love which i adore because of you...
to you..
to my sweetheart...
whom her love which is inside my chest...
inside this heart...
this heart which bleeding because of you...
to you sweetheart...
to you whom her love irrigated my soul...
as a sweet water,to a thirsty heart...

sweetheart...

loved you before i meet you...
loved you before i see you...
loved you just through a thoughts which i had about you...
loved you just only because i saw you ...
saw you only just through my dreams...
dreams which only i have in this dark world...

sweetheart...

don`t know how much you understand those words...
but they came out from my wounding heart...
hope to feel what i feel in...

sweetheart...


decided to write a loves` letter..
to whom i love..
to the most pretty girl
to the pure heart..
to express to her about my love..
which became as a fire inside my chest..
after my missing to her..
and became as a volcano inside me...

sweetheart...
do you feel now..
do you understand ...
do you realize how much i love you ...
hope you do...

by: [email protected]

© 2008 lonely poet


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"sweetheart...
do you feel now..
do you understand ...
do you realize how much i love you ...
hope you do..."

Such passion and thoughts for your love, truthfully penned and certainly would get any girls attention
and I'm sure she would get the message loud and clear, with not a doubt, and also I think she would realise the depth of love shown her in this masterpiece of a poem!

This poem was breathlessly beautiful Hazem!

Hugs Helena


Posted 15 Years Ago


Very sweet.

Posted 15 Years Ago


That was beautiful. Thats about all I can say. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


The only thing that I can say,
to such a sweet and moving write,
(admitting that this poem, for reasons I have with my own sweetheart, made me cry)

are the words,

"yes I do"
(realize)
and
"I love you, too."


(that's what I'd say if it had been written for me.)
This is very pretty!

Posted 15 Years Ago


that is a very sweet poem :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


Very good poem! Very beautiful! I thought it flowed well. Great structure. Well done!

Posted 15 Years Ago


So beautiful, almost like a psalm or a prayer filled with passion and longing, excellent write.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on April 29, 2008

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hazem from jordan .. i am a palestinian man .. adore reading and writing a poems.. more..

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