Mundane

Mundane

A Poem by Hollywood

We got here too late.

We're destroying the world.

We're doomed from our own stupidity,

or better yet our knowledge.

Our inventions.

Our greed,

wanting new things.

F**k the land to suit our needs.

Going back now isn't a possibility.


© 2010 Hollywood



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You are wise and rare in your generation. As a whole people seem to become more apathetic and more self absorbed as society ages. It gives me hope to know that there are young people that still care. My mother was an activist in the 60s-70s and I grew up being taught that one person CAN change the world. Words are a powerful tool and you use them brilliantly. Kudos!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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You are wise and rare in your generation. As a whole people seem to become more apathetic and more self absorbed as society ages. It gives me hope to know that there are young people that still care. My mother was an activist in the 60s-70s and I grew up being taught that one person CAN change the world. Words are a powerful tool and you use them brilliantly. Kudos!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stellar. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it and pretty much agree with you. Also, it's less "poem-like" and almost like a statement/warning. A Pleasure to read, thanks for the read request.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is really edgy, and twisted but very true. you did a really good job, i think the flow is nice. i like it :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A twisted, but true outlook on the world. Nice job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The message you presented was put forth starkly, the pursuit of knowledge has been eating away at the world like acid. Development requires sacrifice, and our race sacrifices only too willingly, looking at what we get now and not the consequences.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

grate poem :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is one of those, in the words of metallica, "sad but true" moments we are destroying our world! and it is because of all those know-it-all greedy people out there.... wonderfully spoken, and overall a great poem... keep up the great work

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We could ahve been the angel protectors of paradise, but instead we are the demonic rulers of hell. very well said, but there may be hope yet....
take care, spence

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very well written defianately 100% amazing

Posted 7 Years Ago


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I'm Holly, I am eighteen. I like feed-back on my writing to improve myself. I'm loud, sarcastic, always smiling. Sometimes vulgar, rude & judging. :] note: for read requests i generally read onl.. more..

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