Is that a Cat?

Is that a Cat?

A Poem by Hollywood
"

Don't read if squimish.

"

Squashed pile of bones & fur.

It was once someone's pet,

now just decay.

The lifeless animals organs

have been picked away.

The sun bakes the carcass.

The rain beats it down

to mush but

doesn't wash it away.


© 2010 Hollywood



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I really like this poem - sure, it's horrific... in a sense :D but the simple description is enticing and creates an image in your head. well done :]

Posted 6 Years Ago


That's the feeling we all get when we see a long gone dead animal, like roadkill. I like this poem a lot.

Posted 7 Years Ago


woah, I thought by the title it was going to be somthing totally different! but I like it. it has a nice feel to itt, very good. you have real talent!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AAAaargh!!! I love cats. They're not too fun when they get smashed!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is good, I like how you relate to a cat but how it's smashed. Good job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love this. i always find it really sad when i see dead animals on the side of the road though :( nonetheless, you did a great job :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Possums, coyotes, rabbits, cats, dogs, skunks, and sometimes birds. Happens all the time over here.

Good description in this piece. Short but well drawn.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ha,I love this!I'm like roadkill queen over here;find me a dead animal and a stick and I can entertain myself for ages. XD

This was sad somehow,kinda dark,but I liked it a lot.Yet another interesting and quirky write.Great job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hahaha cat organs idk why i thought it was funny but idk im retarded or something i digged this poem its not a normal topic

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is dark and awesome:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tags: Death, Cat, Bones

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Hollywood
Hollywood

Stockton, CA



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