Spring is Sprung

Spring is Sprung

A Poem by Hollywood

Spring is coming

back around.

Thawing us from

long sleeves & scarves.

Humid.

Rain.

Blooms of color,

taking place

through the gray.


© 2010 Hollywood



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That wasn't exactly the best review I wrote. I re-read the poem and I do think it is well composed and effective. The title was thought out cleverly and I like short and simple poems like yours; just simple key words the reader can use to create their own image.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I love spring! Thanks for capturing it masterfully in this writing snapshot! It was like reading strokes of colorful brushes.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like how such short poems can be filled with so much emotion. I will have one coming out soon, that you might like. I did enjoy this poem, because you know that a short work can fill someone with so many emotions. Great Job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love it :) really effective and well put together xxx

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Thawing us from
long sleeves & scarves."
I pictured the sun melting the fabric off like ice, leaving them in more Spring-like clothing. Very good.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short and simple;I like it.And as expected of you,it flowed well and was well worded.Good work :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like it short and smooth keep me asking if there was some hidden meaning but ill never know only the writer knows

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is a great poem about Spring but are you happy about Spring coming back?

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem about spring:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 26, 2010
Last Updated on April 26, 2010
Tags: Spring, Rain, Color

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Hollywood
Hollywood

Stockton, CA



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I'm Holly, I am eighteen. I like feed-back on my writing to improve myself. I'm loud, sarcastic, always smiling. Sometimes vulgar, rude & judging. :] note: for read requests i generally read onl.. more..

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