Goodbye

This isn't a negative thought...

Goodbye, my love and hear me
I have to stand on my own feet
You have to believe, release me
And give me what I need.

Goodbye, my love, remember
I am my father's child
I was not brought like puzzle
I've grown so brave and wild.

Goodbye, my love and hear more
Of my mourning and my cry
I'll leave you not more pleasure
But an answer to each lie.

Goodbye, my love, believe me
I have nothing to say
But how will you forget me
If you will close my way?

Goodbye, my love, it's my turn
To grow in my own way
Release me not like newborn
I have to start my day!


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Author's Note

Reviews

[mournful bear]

great emotion writings. I don't want to praise you on the damage from a journey (journey being intimate relationship). I'm an outdoorsmen I think that's why she left me=€ your writings shows me there other humans that experience the same things in life. I hope it get better, if it hasn't already, if I was in your neck of the woods id ask if you'd like to have super. great readings thou haveth. little brown chubby cub mournful bear always outside exploring.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

thanks

[Robin]

I love the rhythm and flow to this poem. Great job.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for the review, Robin.

[Pax]

an easy flow of words that is relate-able... well we all go through something so un reliable love… something was not meant to be…or by each passing lie you can never take it anymore… that starting a new day, a refreshing restart of your life is the best way…

wonderful write kabayan…

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, kabayan!

[Just Kim]

Sad, but very well written. Like your style.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

hmmm :) sad, is this real? seems the emotion is raw and painted honestly. Anyway good write, you are able to express raw feelings of love. But what is good here you have mastered the art of acceptance which will help you to move further and find a better life. Don't stop believin!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Marc. That's the feeling of someone who would want to be free from the curse of traditions and old beliefs, from the cruelty of the norms which wouldn't help on the progress of the family.