Poem 6. New Life

The days when my heart was full of anger were gone.

My heart now is aiming

To be as clean as an innocent child

To reform my broken soul.

The waves are coming now and then.

Too weak faith can be drowned into the deepest sea of eternal sin.

But I have to be strong.

I have to stand for what I believe.

I have to strengthen my faith.

I have to believe that God had sown in me the seed of love

To forgive and forget.

Hatred must be washed away.

It must be gone.

New life…

I know it is not easy to achieve

But the Lord will help me in this battle.

I know…

Reviews

[Constance Payne]

Faith is harder to hold onto than water through the fingers often; but your words of "Hatred must be washed away" are the truest that have been stated. Wonderful read.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, I hope you enjoyed the video which I made first. Actually, the poem is made during making the video. I am the one in the video.

[Ezekiel Silver]

Fantastic poem! I love how strong of a grip this piece has on the reader's attention! Great work!!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks :)

[KeeD]

With his help and grace we shall carry on.. a new life, a new beginning, in our hears is where God belongs. Great write, inspirational

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Keegan :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

ahhh tis the new life

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

And indeed a promise to myself. Thanks PKA. :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yehh

[Alexander Rodgers]

This is beautiful, I love it. You really set the mood and brought forth emotion

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Rodgers. Actually, the video was made first. The poem are the captions in the video.
Thanks for the visit. :)

[Alexander Rodgers]

Anytime :). You made the video as well? Well done.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Yeah. That's one of my hobbies- making motivational and inspirational videos. I made it Sept. 6, last year as my birthday gift to myself, a promise that I will have a new life. Just posted it here last April 2.
Thanks for the time spared here. :)

[MOON]

Forgiveness and love and the God within, beautiful heartfelt write. Thanks for the review.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

:)

[zainul]

A lovely piece that inspires its readers to reform broken soul.
Love the eloquent piece.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, zainul. Glad you love it. :)

[zainul]

You are most welcome :)

[Emily Feret]

Too weak faith can be drowned into the deepest sea of eternal sin.

Wow what a powerful thought, that really can be taken in many different ways! Not just religion but anything that you really have a passion for. Always stand up for what you belive in and really keep that fire. Thank you for sharing!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Emily. Your words are really motivating me towards my passion. :)

[Ency Bearis]

An insightful verses you had presented and penned, great piece.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Kabayan.

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Nice video presentation. Thank you for sharing it too.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks :)