Poem 9. A Distant Star

Concrete poetry

Author's Note

My first try for concrete poetry.

Reviews

[Pax]

oh i love concrete poetry ~ and i think you did a brilliant job on how you formed your words that fits perfectly into a star... and the feeling on it, the dreams and heart glowing life on it ... its shining, stunning !!! ~ every dream starts at the very bottom, a first step is crucial, then the rest is history when you try and never quit... Great!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Yes, Pax. Thanks. :)

[rnuff]

very nicely written, like the formation of it as well

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Kim. Glad you dropped by. :)

[Ency Bearis]

A wonderful thoughts and perfect concrete poem, well done From Dark to Light....errr dhaye pala.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Sir Ency, thanks a lot. Fan mo na kasi ako now. May mga books ka na pala. Ang galing mo. Pero hindi ako ng-ask sa yo how to make Concrete Poetry, kaya hayan po ang first concrete fruit of effort ko.
Wag na magkakamali, dhaye na uli. Lighter na kasi ngayon ang mood ko kaya balik sa dhaye. Hehehe. Perfect po ba? Love ko yang piece na yan kasi ang hirap buuhin.
Thanks, Sir Ency. God bless! :)

[Ency Bearis]

Mahirap talagang mag compose ng concrete poetry. You have to select the stanza and pick the words that fits to the structure.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Brilliant! level up to Sir Ency, BOOM na BOOM! Great artistic work and great poem can't say more you are very inventive both words and visuals, truly it reflects your works to your first love.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Marc. Actually I am so happy after making this piece. It means a lot to me. The words...are those what I really feel. The figure I've made is not that easy to accomplish...like what the poem says itself. You're right, I tried my best to discover the way in doing it myself. Now, I've got the technique. Yes! I'll try some more. Yehey!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

This is my first try in making a concrete poetry. Thanks to Sir Ency, your works are my inspiration in making this piece.