Poem 31. I Kissed Him

A Senryu

I kissed him again

Sweet taste to my dying soul

I kissed him goodbye.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Pax]

ahh ~ bitter sweet!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Theme ko yan pag ganitong malapit na naman matapos ang online activity ko. Hehe. Hindi na kasi ako palaging nag-o-online. Oh, di ba kala mo malalim pinaghuhugutan niyan. Alam ni Marc, tungkol yan noon b4 umalis ako papuntang Manila at Cavite. hehe. Theme ko uli yan now kasi matatapos na load ng broadband ko. Huhu!

[Zahra]

very nice senryu. Nicely describing the emotion and pain.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, IHAV. Glad you like this short piece of mine. :)

[Jack...]

Very beautiful and very sad. It is amazing how the emotion just purs from this little gem. Very touching.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Little gem...yes, it is. I really poured my emotion on this.. tried to sum it all in three lines. Whenever I view it myself, I am still touched, and memories go back...still hurting me. Thanks for the compliment, Jack.

[Jack...]

I meant "Little gem" in a very complmentary way for I am hurting from the pain you feel and so wonderfully described.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Yes, I get it, Jack. Don't worry, I really considered this as my little gem because I used to make long pieces but nowadays I am hooked with these challenging short ones including Haiku, Tanka and Limerick. Thanks again for the time spared on this. :)

[Sami Khalil]

Such fine work and powerful emotions in a short poem...Pen on...:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Sami. Glad you're always there to view my little works and read the emotions behind them. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Leslie Philibert]

a fine beauty in a few words...

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Sir Leslie. Glad you dropped by. :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Kissing for the last time will close everything with sweetness and pain. great write few words with dreamy feel experience.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

And Sir Ency also reminded me of Senryu. Haha. At first I thought it is a Haiku. (Haiku is about nature and season only).
Thanks, Marc :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

yeah kita mo ang haiku ko may season heheheh

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Oo si Sir Ency din nagturo sa akin :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Nature and season din naman yung first two Haikus ko. Nakalimutan ko lang tong Senryu pero kasama to sa ni-research ko dati. hehehe. Nag-change din ako ng avatar...Gaya-gaya ako sa yo eh. Hehe.:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol hhhhaaaha

[Horizon K.]

So profoundly sad, that final kiss goodbye... And I agree with Coyote, better to end with a kiss.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, HK. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to leave with a kiss. Better to leave without negative words or actions. A goodbye kiss allowed the last memory to be okay. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for the visit CP. :)

[Ency Bearis]

Heart rending Senryu, well penned.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Ay, oo nga pala, Sir Ency. Haiku is about nature of season only. Hehe. Senryu nga pala to. Thanks po for the not so obvious reminder. hehe. :)

[Ency Bearis]

You're welcome dhaye.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Nature or season po yun. Wrong typing na naman gawa ko. Thanks again.

[Ency Bearis]

don't worry about it no one is perfect except by the name of Perfecto, he,he, he.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Yes, Sir Ency. What is important is we know how to accept our flaws. Good day po!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

There's no forever. Everything has an end...