Poem 5. I Am Just Friendly

What's wrong with that?

I am just friendly, it’s just my nature

 

Always finding friends and neighbors

Married, single, widow, young and old

 

Forever it will be my trademark

Respect is what  I give to you

In all you do and think

Every time you speak, I listen

Never did I impose my will

Dear you are to me like others

Lie is what I hate

You should remember that, my dear friend.

Reviews

[Moose'thePoet]

I will surly remember that my friend...
That's an amazing writing there... Thanks for shearing, I really needed to read something like this...

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you for reading

[Pax]

oh this neighbor of mine is really friendly it shown in her best of poetry ~ you may shine my friend ~ i say this because i am your friendly neighborhood(not the spider), but the man behind your backyard lol ~ I enjoyed this Kabayan, well expressed!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Man behind my backyard...bahala ka. There are many dogs in my backyard. Haha!
Thanks for the kind words, Kabayang Pax. Glad you enjoyed this acrostic poem. Pambata ba? hehe. ")

[Pax]

hahaha ~ grabi ka naman, ipapakain mo ba sa aso mo yung friendly neighbor mo ~ lol
Pambata, di naman at first but now that you mention it, ikaw, ikaw na si lola ~ hahaha ~ joke lng ~ di naman, the rhyme is totally good and the message is loud and clear ~

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Haha. Kapag ganito sa akin ang lahat ng lola, mag-aasawa uli kahat ng lolo. Lol.:)

[Pax]

haha ~ may ganun ! lol ~

[Ency Bearis]

A wonderful attitude, though I'm far away I can sense that you have this kind heart.
(oh, I'm sorry maybe it's a lie - just kidding, biro lang ha ? I just need your smile and I can sense it )

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Liar! Lol. :) Thank you, Sir Ency. I really smiled. Just starting to make different kinds of poetry for Hear My Mind Vol.3. This one is an acrostic poem.

[Ency Bearis]

I noted that its an acrostic poem. You're welcome

[SHEEMA HUQ]

People can be rather suspicious of people who are generous and friendly, this feels as if it has been written from the heart, from a child's perspective, perhaps, touching

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Sheema. :)

[Holly Mason]

very creative and lovely to read
like how you take a stand with your last line
title grabbed my attention
thank you for sharing , nothing wrong with that*)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Holly. Sometimes when you are too much friendly, some people misjudge you for being such. read moreThanks, Holly. Sometimes when you are too much friendly, some people misjudge you for being such.

Glad you visit on my page. It's an honor for me. :)

[Sami Khalil]

And more than just friendly. Smart poetess...:)
A good write...:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Sami. Wow! You always describe me that way. I really appreciate your words. :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Jack...]

A very good trait and there is absolutely nothing wrong with it. Very nice Dhaye.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Oh, thanks a lot Jack.
This is for a friend who treated me wrong, but he's not involved in this site so he won't read this. If hope this site could whisper this to him. Lol. :)